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Slowly Dying
Frozen heart
Transformation commanded
Devotion challenged
Passion demanded
Behavior erratic
Trouble maker
Memory fails
Doubt creator
Endless lies
Phone monitored
Friends selected
Multiple Rules
Mind Games
Lacks ability
Keys vanish
Constant anguish
Disempowered
Restless
Scared
Alone
Bitter disappointment
Confused mind
Nerves frying
Silently, I’m dying.
20/11/20
“© Australian
Copyright Council 2019”
Transformation commanded
Devotion challenged
Passion demanded
Behavior erratic
Trouble maker
Memory fails
Doubt creator
Endless lies
Phone monitored
Friends selected
Multiple Rules
Mind Games
Lacks ability
Keys vanish
Constant anguish
Disempowered
Restless
Scared
Alone
Bitter disappointment
Confused mind
Nerves frying
Silently, I’m dying.
20/11/20
“© Australian
Copyright Council 2019”
Published 19th Nov 2019
| Edited 13th Jan 2020
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9th Dec 2019 5:15am
Interesting poem... Sounds like the signs of mental illness, or am abusive relationship. You still a good job at expressing yourself here, and I like the style. Good job, joy!
11th Dec 2019 7:18am
Thanks, my poems dont always reflect my circumstances... I look at the world around me and use that as inspiration.
25th Mar 2024 4:23am
In moments of emptiness and exasperation, poetry helps us guide through those paths.
Nicely done Joy.
Nicely done Joy.
