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Why War?
I wish it was a simple thing
To explain why people go to war.
But anything that can reduce
Society and lives to rubble
Is from an unbridled darkness
Of our prehistoric DNA.
Like the wolf in domestic dogs,
We too have the capability
To turn and bite the hand that feeds.
Beginning from the first smell of blood,
Marking territory with scent,
Before a God existed, my child.
Written by
Heaven_sent_Kathy
Published 16th Nov 2019
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Entered in cold_fusion’s ‘why do people go to war?’
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Re. Why War?
16th Nov 2019 2:11pm
It is base and primal chest-beating...alongside fear.
A truthful Write penned here Kathy, it is subject that could be detailed to no end.
Good luck in the comp!!!
A truthful Write penned here Kathy, it is subject that could be detailed to no end.
Good luck in the comp!!!
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Re: Re. Why War?
16th Nov 2019 2:16pm
Thank you my Soul friend, and aah yes, ad infinitum. The challenge states no more than 100 words so I hit on the high points of part of where it comes from - one of many facets. It's good to reign oneself in from any urge to go epic. Ah but I digress.🙏🏻
Kathy
Kathy
Re. Why War?
16th Nov 2019 3:04pm
Re: Re. Why War?
20th Nov 2019 8:43am
Thank you gracious Stoney for your visit and such words.
blessed and blessings
Kathy
blessed and blessings
Kathy
Re: Re. Why War?
20th Nov 2019 12:01pm
Re. Why War?
16th Nov 2019 3:51pm
Delightfully succinct this is...and penned with heat and passion...I'd say you presented the quandary well...good luck in the competition, Kathy good entry here... hugs... Ely
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Re: Re. Why War?
20th Nov 2019 8:47am
Thank you so much, MzEly one, for your hugs of gestures and words expressed. I'm honored for your appreciation, dear.
blessed and blessings
Kathy
blessed and blessings
Kathy
Re: Re. Why War?
20th Nov 2019 2:35pm
Awww shucks, MizK...you're gonna spoil me...thank you for the very kind words...hugs...Ely
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Re. Why War?
16th Nov 2019 9:08pm
Re: Re. Why War?
20th Nov 2019 8:49am
Thank you Daniel for your good wishes and appreciation of my humble effort. :)
blessed and blessings
Kathy
blessed and blessings
Kathy
Re. Why War?
16th Nov 2019 9:51pm
A great entry, Kathy! I enjoyed your perspective very much.
Best of luck in the comp!
Best of luck in the comp!
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Re: Re. Why War?
20th Nov 2019 8:53am
Thank you so very much dear One. It wasn't my intention to try but then it came to me in its simplicity - there are entries far better than this - but I felt the need to put my thoughts out there, contest or no. I'm honored by your well wishes.
blessed and blessings
Kathy xo
blessed and blessings
Kathy xo