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When I Turn Around
I was wrong.
I didn't love you.
I was infatuated by you.
I thought that what I felt
for you could've turned into
love.
But I'm not sure anymore.
Please forgive me.
I want to love you.
But I can't.
It's not right.
Why should I love you,
when there's no chance of you loving me back?
I didn't love you.
I was infatuated by you.
I thought that what I felt
for you could've turned into
love.
But I'm not sure anymore.
Please forgive me.
I want to love you.
But I can't.
It's not right.
Why should I love you,
when there's no chance of you loving me back?
Published 15th Nov 2019
Author's Note
I thought I was in love once, turns out I was just in love with the version of him I created in my mind.
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
15th Nov 2019 4:28pm
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15th Nov 2019 5:58pm
15th Nov 2019 11:51pm
16th Nov 2019 3:19am
Anonymous
16th Nov 2019 4:28am
Hey Flower......luv this......if thought this way before now.......I could’ve saved myself a lot of pain.......great ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Nov 2019 8:31am
This could be the reflective sequel of your first poem on DUP. Many will say 'been there' about having been in love with an idea of someone that was not borne out in fact.
Anonymous
16th Nov 2019 9:32pm
"I want to love you but I can't"....very well expressed. Deep, complex feelings well translated into words.
17th Nov 2019 1:09am
17th Nov 2019 7:55pm
He doesn't have to love you in order for you to love him back, Wallflower. Love is not a bargaining chip.
