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Bitter Sweet Loss
The splash of sweet
cinder blocks, float
lifelessly to the ocean bottom.
With them,
my lies for
all you've done.
My tears,
all I've
cried for you.
The scars
of markings
I've made to
please you.
And myself.
For you're my
better half,
and that's the
bitter sweet loss
of it all.
cinder blocks, float
lifelessly to the ocean bottom.
With them,
my lies for
all you've done.
My tears,
all I've
cried for you.
The scars
of markings
I've made to
please you.
And myself.
For you're my
better half,
and that's the
bitter sweet loss
of it all.
Published 26th Dec 2011
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26th Dec 2011 6:06pm
28th Dec 2011 8:13am
nothing like the release of it all forever ,its a cleanseing isnt it very good i like it
Anonymous
22nd May 2012 3:06pm
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