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the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
if the sky
knows,
it does not say
a word
if the fence
outside the window
knows,
it does not share
it's thoughts
if the wind passing by
knows.
it will not whisper
it's secrets
if this sly, old world
knows,
then the answer is
lost to the ages
all i can do is sit,
smoke, think
and wait
as i watch my shadow
on the wall gather these
last ungraceful moments
that flail like a mangled
swan
then desend into
the ebony
orbit
and at last
I
will know
and
walk
that
forever
trail
picking up the spoiled
rind of fruit falling
from God's eternal
mouth
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Re. the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
8th Nov 2019 9:01pm
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8th Nov 2019 9:03pm
Re. the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
8th Nov 2019 9:38pm
It IS excellent poetry - an acceptance of what is with a dash of hope at what's to come.
*cough*
[it's] thoughts/secrets
*cough*
[it's] thoughts/secrets
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Re: Re. the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
8th Nov 2019 10:03pm
Much thanks Ahvanti. Your presence is valued here at DUP. Hope you had an awesome birthday.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
8th Nov 2019 10:11pm
Re: Re. the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
8th Nov 2019 10:31pm
Re: Re. the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
8th Nov 2019 10:45pm
It goes on for about a week despite me not really making a biggie about it. I don't even have it listed on my facebook ( *GASP* )! But, someone, every freaking year, goes and posts and then it starts! LOL!
This is a milestone so I'm rolling along with 'em. Hell, none of us know how long we got, or if we'll make it to the next. Sometimes it's not about us - but those who love giving. It's awkward; however, it's better to feel awkward than to take their blessing away. xo
This is a milestone so I'm rolling along with 'em. Hell, none of us know how long we got, or if we'll make it to the next. Sometimes it's not about us - but those who love giving. It's awkward; however, it's better to feel awkward than to take their blessing away. xo
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8th Nov 2019 11:22pm
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Re: Re. the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
9th Nov 2019 1:12am
Thank you BB. Much appreciated.
Winding down for the weekend.
Hope you are well my friend.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Winding down for the weekend.
Hope you are well my friend.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
9th Nov 2019 1:15am
its thoughts, its secrets... the only nit in a really solid, really expressive write. pleasure to read, bk :cool:
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Re: Re. the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
9th Nov 2019 1:21am
It's thoughts. It's secrets. Exactly what i aimed for. The world around us goes unnoticed.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
9th Nov 2019 1:38am
so not the secrets of the wind and the thoughts of the fence???
ok, that threw me a bit. perhaps my brain's tired. it's still coming to terms with smh :lol:
ok, that threw me a bit. perhaps my brain's tired. it's still coming to terms with smh :lol:
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Re. the knowledge of fruit falling from the harvest tree
9th Nov 2019 4:12am
Yes. It's the secert of the wind. The thoughts of the fence, however i wasnt going to repeat; the wind will not whisper it's secrets, the fence will not tell it's thoughts. I personally find that redundant as the subject ( the wind and fence) relates to it's. That is just my personal preference of course. In my world it's more fun to get dirty than to be perfect.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.