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PEACHES AND CREAM - Inspired by and written with Tommielynn
I had just begun my midnight grocery shopping when I noticed her in the produce section. Long blond hair cascading over white tattooed shoulders. She’s wearing a pink tank top that barely conceals her large breasts. Running her hand over some fuzzy peaches she lifts one to check for firmness. Smiling she looks my way with her mesmerizing blue eyes and winks. I immediately look behind me reasoning that I, a middle aged man dressed in a grungy tee, shorts, and flip-flops, could not possibly be the target of her alluring gaze. There was no one else there. She presses her full pink lips against the peach giving it a long kiss. How can this be? This goddess is flirting with geeky old me.
I was just doing some shopping when I saw him, he looked at me and I smiled and winked. He looked confused, turning to look behind him then back at me, he was handsome, something about him that caught my eye. I wanted to talk to him, hear his voice. But how could I get this handsome man to talk to me? He was still looking so I thought flirting was the answer, taking the fuzzy fruit I had in my hand and bringing it to my lips giving it a sensual kiss. Staring at him while I did so, hoping he would come closer to me.
What do I do now? Is she just messing with my head. What do I have to lose, a little dignity maybe. I approach her slightly embarrassed with not being able to hide my growing excitement and not knowing what the hell I’m going to say. I go with humor and say “you’re gonna buy that, right?” pointing to the peach. She seemed a bit confused. “You know store policy says that if you kiss it you buy it.” She smiled broadly, “oh right” she says and continues “I was hoping you’d buy it for me.” I was still for a moment letting the waves of her sweet music flow over me. With a shaky hand I reach out for the peach which she deposits on my palm and then folds my fingers around the fuzzy treasure. Her skin touching mine sends a surge of sensual energy through my body. I know you’re not supposed to grocery shop hungry but I now hungered for the sensation again of her skin against mine. I bow slightly and say “with great pleasure I will buy you this magical fruit my lady” I then grab and kiss her hand.
I was so happy he came over to me.And he made me laugh, I find that very sexy. Handing him my peach, I touched him, it felt good, it felt right. How would I get my peach back from him after he buys it? I thought as his soft warm lips kissed my hand. I wanted more of his mouth, his touch, I wanted him to make me laugh again. But in a different setting.I wanted to feed him my peach.
She says “I’m done with my shopping. And it looks like you’re just getting started” I glance at my practically empty cart and say “no I’m actually done too. I just came in to buy this” holding up the peach by her kisses blessed. She grinned saying “well if that’s the case, would you be a gentleman and walk me to my car. I don’t like being alone in the dark parking lot.” I sarcastically retort “and you trust ME?” She laughed and asked “shouldn’t I?” We begin walking toward the check-out and I say “It would be an honor to escort you to your vehicle my lady.” Playing along she responds “why thank you kind sir.”
Leaving the store with him next to me I felt warm, excited and very turned on. Wanting to know more about him but not wanting to speak for fear I'd stumble on my words. All I could think about is his hands, craving them on my flesh, again ...but this time I needed both his hands. What would he do or say when we reached my car? Would it be a quick goodbye or a long hello? I had to say something, I couldn't let the night end with just one hand kiss and a peach."Thanks for buying my peach, would you like to share it?" , was all I could say. He looked at me like I was the most beautiful person he’d ever seen. I waited for him to answer, hoping he would say yes.
As we walked to her car I had this overwhelming urge to hold her hand or put my arm around her. I didn’t, thinking it too forward. I realize that we have known each other for only a short 45 minutes but I couldn’t bear her departure...thinking I may never see her again. We reach her black SUV with tinted back windows. She pops the hatch and I load her groceries into the back.
Slamming down the hatch sounds an abrupt note of finality to our brief interlude. I say “well you’re all set.” looking somehow sad she responds “it was very nice to meet you” extending her hand for a shake. Thinking it can’t end this way, I take her hand in mine and pull her to me pressing my lips against hers while thinking I should prepare for the swift upper thrust of her knee to my groin. I was amazed when she put up no resistance and grabbed me from behind pulling me so close that my bulge pressed against her tummy. I whisper in her ear “yes, I would like very much to share that peach with you.” She laughs and then pulls me in for a long, hard kiss. She says “you know my back seats fold down” to which I respond “oh really, does that come standard?”
His body pressed against mine excites me, his lips soft and warm, his excitement poking me, it felt right. I wanted that moment to last forever, I was happy he grabbed me, and so glad to hear he wants some of my peach. I just want to crawl in the back seat of my suv and have him inside of me. I fold the seats down and get in, softly speaking I tell him to come in and make a come here motion with my hand. He gets in and sits on the opposite side of me. I rest my hand on his shine and say,"would you like some music on?", handing him the keys he leans up front and turns the ignition just a bit so the radio comes on, he tunes it in and turns it up. He gets comfortable again but this time he leans towards me, one hand o ntop of my hand that still rests on his shine and his other hand gently holding my chin bringing me closer to his mouth. My breathing gets heavier, I can feel my nipples growing, aching for his wet tongue to tease them. My hand travels up his leg, needing to feel his hard length, wanting to free it from his shorts. As he kisses me I feel his pulse race, racing with my own.
This is really happening! I am sitting in the back seat of an SUV next to my soon to be lover. This is not a contrived scene from a cheesy porno...it’s unbelievably real. She hands me the keys to turn on some music. I tune in my favorite classic rock station and thrill as I hear the the beginning salvo of Led Zeppelin's “Black Dog.” The music intensifies my desire and I can feel my cock stiffen to the point of claustrophobia. My balls now ache awaiting the release of their creamy burden. I sit back and bask awhile in her beauty running my hand across her cheek and then traveling down her neck to her irresistible white shoulders adorned with colorful graffiti. The fruity scent of her hair is intoxicating. Her big blue eyes stare at me with an expression of trust desiring my love. We begin to kiss both wanting to consume completely the other. Our tongues meet and begin to dance and plan their sensual activities for the night. She grabs my hand and places it on her left breast. With a childlike sense of wonder I run my finger across the hard surface of her clothed nipple. I give it a pinch and she gasps. With staccato kisses I begin my journey down her neck, to her shoulders finally reaching her cleavage. I run the hard tip of my tongue along the the length of the crevice.
As Led Zeppelin was playing I enjoyed his touch, his mouth, the way he pinched my nipple.Our tongue's clashing together making sweet sucking sounds.His lips on my skin slowly making love to my neck making his way down to my pretty cleavage. With his tongue he glides in between my breasts leaving a slick line of saliva, using his index finger he goes over the line gently, down to my waist. I reach for his bulge, wanting to feel his soft shaft in my hand, I need to feel it on my lips.The intense need to have him in my mouth drove me crazy, I moved faster, taking his shorts off then removing my own pants. I got on my knees and kissed my way down to his cock.His hands on my shoulders, I hold his stiffness in my hand and kiss the tip, he lets out a gasp and grabs my head, holding me he enters my throat slowly. Thrusting up a couple times then stopping me, he says, "I need your hot pussy on my cock." So I get up and before I slide him up in me my breasts are in his face, he grabs them and makes my nipples shine.Holding his thick cock in hand I ease my pussy onto him, every inch deep inside my walls, his hands on my ass pushing me down on him with every lunge.
Words cannot adequately describe the euphoria I feel being inside her, feeling her muscles tighten around my shaft made slippery by her juices. Her arms rest on my shoulders, hands clasped behind my neck. Her face is inches away from mine and I can feel her hot breath as she pushes down her hips in rhythm with my thrusts. Her tits are absolute works of art and they taunt me as they come near my lips and then, with our motion, move beyond my reach. I see ecstasy in her eyes fixed on mine. She moans and smiles when her special spot is touched. I grin when one of my favorite songs,AC/DC’s “You Shook Me All Night Long,” begins playing on the radio. My fingers dig into her delicious ass as our fucking intensifies. I was awe struck when she first took off her pants and bent over so I could see her beautiful ass with her swollen labia peeking through. Unable to resist I had run a wet finger over her succulent pink folds. And that was just before she took my throbbing cock into her mouth and blew my mind.
I push deep inside her and stop, pulling her into an embrace. Her breast feel so good pressed against my chest. We alternate between hungry kisses and my sucking her tits. I whisper “I want to taste you.” She somewhat reluctantly pulls herself off me and I sink to my knees between her thighs spread wide in anticipation. Her reluctance quickly vanishes when I run my full tongue from her cute pucker to her clit. She is so wet and her scent is intoxicating. I suck her clit and insert two finger into her pussy getting the taste I desired I removed the fingers dripping wet with her potion and lick them clean. I lay across her and kiss her hard. She says “I want you to cum inside me.” I say “but what if...” she puts a finger to my lips and says ”it'll be alright.” She straddles me and guides my stiff love back into her welcoming home. We begin again our rhythm and I, being so turned on by her request, am almost ready for sweet release but I hold it back wanting to cum in tandem with her orgasm. She yells out “Oh God!” and the shuddering of her pelvis makes me flood her with my hot cream as I too groan out a similar supplication. As I remove my still throbbing penis she says “I want a taste” as she envelopes my head between her full pink lipstick coated lips licking the creamy cocktail off of me. She dips a finger into her pussy emerging with some of my frothy gift and exclaims, as she lick her finger “mmmmmmmm how about we make that peaches with cream.
I was just doing some shopping when I saw him, he looked at me and I smiled and winked. He looked confused, turning to look behind him then back at me, he was handsome, something about him that caught my eye. I wanted to talk to him, hear his voice. But how could I get this handsome man to talk to me? He was still looking so I thought flirting was the answer, taking the fuzzy fruit I had in my hand and bringing it to my lips giving it a sensual kiss. Staring at him while I did so, hoping he would come closer to me.
What do I do now? Is she just messing with my head. What do I have to lose, a little dignity maybe. I approach her slightly embarrassed with not being able to hide my growing excitement and not knowing what the hell I’m going to say. I go with humor and say “you’re gonna buy that, right?” pointing to the peach. She seemed a bit confused. “You know store policy says that if you kiss it you buy it.” She smiled broadly, “oh right” she says and continues “I was hoping you’d buy it for me.” I was still for a moment letting the waves of her sweet music flow over me. With a shaky hand I reach out for the peach which she deposits on my palm and then folds my fingers around the fuzzy treasure. Her skin touching mine sends a surge of sensual energy through my body. I know you’re not supposed to grocery shop hungry but I now hungered for the sensation again of her skin against mine. I bow slightly and say “with great pleasure I will buy you this magical fruit my lady” I then grab and kiss her hand.
I was so happy he came over to me.And he made me laugh, I find that very sexy. Handing him my peach, I touched him, it felt good, it felt right. How would I get my peach back from him after he buys it? I thought as his soft warm lips kissed my hand. I wanted more of his mouth, his touch, I wanted him to make me laugh again. But in a different setting.I wanted to feed him my peach.
She says “I’m done with my shopping. And it looks like you’re just getting started” I glance at my practically empty cart and say “no I’m actually done too. I just came in to buy this” holding up the peach by her kisses blessed. She grinned saying “well if that’s the case, would you be a gentleman and walk me to my car. I don’t like being alone in the dark parking lot.” I sarcastically retort “and you trust ME?” She laughed and asked “shouldn’t I?” We begin walking toward the check-out and I say “It would be an honor to escort you to your vehicle my lady.” Playing along she responds “why thank you kind sir.”
Leaving the store with him next to me I felt warm, excited and very turned on. Wanting to know more about him but not wanting to speak for fear I'd stumble on my words. All I could think about is his hands, craving them on my flesh, again ...but this time I needed both his hands. What would he do or say when we reached my car? Would it be a quick goodbye or a long hello? I had to say something, I couldn't let the night end with just one hand kiss and a peach."Thanks for buying my peach, would you like to share it?" , was all I could say. He looked at me like I was the most beautiful person he’d ever seen. I waited for him to answer, hoping he would say yes.
As we walked to her car I had this overwhelming urge to hold her hand or put my arm around her. I didn’t, thinking it too forward. I realize that we have known each other for only a short 45 minutes but I couldn’t bear her departure...thinking I may never see her again. We reach her black SUV with tinted back windows. She pops the hatch and I load her groceries into the back.
Slamming down the hatch sounds an abrupt note of finality to our brief interlude. I say “well you’re all set.” looking somehow sad she responds “it was very nice to meet you” extending her hand for a shake. Thinking it can’t end this way, I take her hand in mine and pull her to me pressing my lips against hers while thinking I should prepare for the swift upper thrust of her knee to my groin. I was amazed when she put up no resistance and grabbed me from behind pulling me so close that my bulge pressed against her tummy. I whisper in her ear “yes, I would like very much to share that peach with you.” She laughs and then pulls me in for a long, hard kiss. She says “you know my back seats fold down” to which I respond “oh really, does that come standard?”
His body pressed against mine excites me, his lips soft and warm, his excitement poking me, it felt right. I wanted that moment to last forever, I was happy he grabbed me, and so glad to hear he wants some of my peach. I just want to crawl in the back seat of my suv and have him inside of me. I fold the seats down and get in, softly speaking I tell him to come in and make a come here motion with my hand. He gets in and sits on the opposite side of me. I rest my hand on his shine and say,"would you like some music on?", handing him the keys he leans up front and turns the ignition just a bit so the radio comes on, he tunes it in and turns it up. He gets comfortable again but this time he leans towards me, one hand o ntop of my hand that still rests on his shine and his other hand gently holding my chin bringing me closer to his mouth. My breathing gets heavier, I can feel my nipples growing, aching for his wet tongue to tease them. My hand travels up his leg, needing to feel his hard length, wanting to free it from his shorts. As he kisses me I feel his pulse race, racing with my own.
This is really happening! I am sitting in the back seat of an SUV next to my soon to be lover. This is not a contrived scene from a cheesy porno...it’s unbelievably real. She hands me the keys to turn on some music. I tune in my favorite classic rock station and thrill as I hear the the beginning salvo of Led Zeppelin's “Black Dog.” The music intensifies my desire and I can feel my cock stiffen to the point of claustrophobia. My balls now ache awaiting the release of their creamy burden. I sit back and bask awhile in her beauty running my hand across her cheek and then traveling down her neck to her irresistible white shoulders adorned with colorful graffiti. The fruity scent of her hair is intoxicating. Her big blue eyes stare at me with an expression of trust desiring my love. We begin to kiss both wanting to consume completely the other. Our tongues meet and begin to dance and plan their sensual activities for the night. She grabs my hand and places it on her left breast. With a childlike sense of wonder I run my finger across the hard surface of her clothed nipple. I give it a pinch and she gasps. With staccato kisses I begin my journey down her neck, to her shoulders finally reaching her cleavage. I run the hard tip of my tongue along the the length of the crevice.
As Led Zeppelin was playing I enjoyed his touch, his mouth, the way he pinched my nipple.Our tongue's clashing together making sweet sucking sounds.His lips on my skin slowly making love to my neck making his way down to my pretty cleavage. With his tongue he glides in between my breasts leaving a slick line of saliva, using his index finger he goes over the line gently, down to my waist. I reach for his bulge, wanting to feel his soft shaft in my hand, I need to feel it on my lips.The intense need to have him in my mouth drove me crazy, I moved faster, taking his shorts off then removing my own pants. I got on my knees and kissed my way down to his cock.His hands on my shoulders, I hold his stiffness in my hand and kiss the tip, he lets out a gasp and grabs my head, holding me he enters my throat slowly. Thrusting up a couple times then stopping me, he says, "I need your hot pussy on my cock." So I get up and before I slide him up in me my breasts are in his face, he grabs them and makes my nipples shine.Holding his thick cock in hand I ease my pussy onto him, every inch deep inside my walls, his hands on my ass pushing me down on him with every lunge.
Words cannot adequately describe the euphoria I feel being inside her, feeling her muscles tighten around my shaft made slippery by her juices. Her arms rest on my shoulders, hands clasped behind my neck. Her face is inches away from mine and I can feel her hot breath as she pushes down her hips in rhythm with my thrusts. Her tits are absolute works of art and they taunt me as they come near my lips and then, with our motion, move beyond my reach. I see ecstasy in her eyes fixed on mine. She moans and smiles when her special spot is touched. I grin when one of my favorite songs,AC/DC’s “You Shook Me All Night Long,” begins playing on the radio. My fingers dig into her delicious ass as our fucking intensifies. I was awe struck when she first took off her pants and bent over so I could see her beautiful ass with her swollen labia peeking through. Unable to resist I had run a wet finger over her succulent pink folds. And that was just before she took my throbbing cock into her mouth and blew my mind.
I push deep inside her and stop, pulling her into an embrace. Her breast feel so good pressed against my chest. We alternate between hungry kisses and my sucking her tits. I whisper “I want to taste you.” She somewhat reluctantly pulls herself off me and I sink to my knees between her thighs spread wide in anticipation. Her reluctance quickly vanishes when I run my full tongue from her cute pucker to her clit. She is so wet and her scent is intoxicating. I suck her clit and insert two finger into her pussy getting the taste I desired I removed the fingers dripping wet with her potion and lick them clean. I lay across her and kiss her hard. She says “I want you to cum inside me.” I say “but what if...” she puts a finger to my lips and says ”it'll be alright.” She straddles me and guides my stiff love back into her welcoming home. We begin again our rhythm and I, being so turned on by her request, am almost ready for sweet release but I hold it back wanting to cum in tandem with her orgasm. She yells out “Oh God!” and the shuddering of her pelvis makes me flood her with my hot cream as I too groan out a similar supplication. As I remove my still throbbing penis she says “I want a taste” as she envelopes my head between her full pink lipstick coated lips licking the creamy cocktail off of me. She dips a finger into her pussy emerging with some of my frothy gift and exclaims, as she lick her finger “mmmmmmmm how about we make that peaches with cream.
Published 8th Nov 2019
Author's Note
Tommielynn and I wrote this playful romp back in June of 2013. I truly miss Tommielynn. Okay in rereading the piece it may be a tad Penthouse forumy but fun none the less.
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8th Nov 2019 6:32am
8th Nov 2019 3:20pm
I know, I noticed that in retrospect. This will be up for a limited time only. It was super fun to write with Tommielynn.
8th Nov 2019 1:27pm
LOL grocery shopping will never be the same....!!
And now "gonna make you burn, gonna make you staang..." is stuck in my head. 😎🎶
And now "gonna make you burn, gonna make you staang..." is stuck in my head. 😎🎶
8th Nov 2019 3:25pm
I am glad you like it, Titanium 😁 Something to read perched on a comfy branch in your favorite tree 🙄 Does it diminish my refined erotica image?
8th Nov 2019 3:43pm
Honestly, erotica's not really my thing. What I like about your writing in general is your sly humour & honest observations. And occasional nerdiness. 😉
Anyway, I've heard people say that "what others think of you is none of your business". It's not something I manage to remember a lot of the time, but it seems appropriate here..... don't sweat it, you're you, cheesy porn & all. ❤
Anyway, I've heard people say that "what others think of you is none of your business". It's not something I manage to remember a lot of the time, but it seems appropriate here..... don't sweat it, you're you, cheesy porn & all. ❤
8th Nov 2019 7:09pm
This is a little naughty, but it's a dang good read. We enjoyed it beginning to end, tight work
8th Nov 2019 7:25pm
Thank you so much I_IS_ME! I applaud you for reading it beginning to end... I'm glad it captured your attention. I sincerely appreciate your words of encouragement and I am certain Tommielynn will as well.
9th Nov 2019 9:23pm
I remember this one. It was/is pretty damn hot, thanks for the bump!🍑🔥
23rd Jun 2020 11:13pm
Oh my, my I absolutely love everything about this piece
The way you both brought the reader in to be with you to share everything you felt
The mention of Led Zeppelin was spot on great experience as was the tattooed shoulders and the Buldge poking her tummy
This is great writing bravo
The way you both brought the reader in to be with you to share everything you felt
The mention of Led Zeppelin was spot on great experience as was the tattooed shoulders and the Buldge poking her tummy
This is great writing bravo
24th Jun 2020 00:09am
Thank you so much Valeriya❣❣ I am so pleased that an erotic goddess like yourself found the prose captivating and sexy. I too love the Led Zepplin reference. Can't you imagine fu*!$ng to "Black Dog?"
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24th Jun 2020 8:56am
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24th Jun 2020 9:16am
Thank you so much Sky. I am glad you got in there...never been in a threesome😋 We had fun writing it.
