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The secret of morning songs
When the sun..
Gets heigh!
There is something to...
Take the eyes!
I sent massages..
To a nightingale!
I told her to sing...
With every qualia!
When the days...
Are long!
Perhaps you will understand..
The sweetest song!
Songs have secrets...
Must be!
The secrets belongs to..
Yourself and me!!
Gets heigh!
There is something to...
Take the eyes!
I sent massages..
To a nightingale!
I told her to sing...
With every qualia!
When the days...
Are long!
Perhaps you will understand..
The sweetest song!
Songs have secrets...
Must be!
The secrets belongs to..
Yourself and me!!
Published 6th Nov 2019
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When the sun...
Gets high!
There is something to...
Take the eyes!
I sent messages...
To a nightingale!
I told her to sing...
With every qualia!
When the days...
Are long!
Perhaps you will understand...
The sweetest song!
Songs have secrets...
Must be!
The secrets belong to...
Yourself and me!!
Is this what you were aiming for?
Gets high!
There is something to...
Take the eyes!
I sent messages...
To a nightingale!
I told her to sing...
With every qualia!
When the days...
Are long!
Perhaps you will understand...
The sweetest song!
Songs have secrets...
Must be!
The secrets belong to...
Yourself and me!!
Is this what you were aiming for?
6th Nov 2019 9:12am
6th Nov 2019 1:32pm
There are grammatical & spelling errors in your poem & my comment is hopefully showing you the correct version.
6th Nov 2019 6:28pm
