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Wildfire🔥
There’s just no place to go
As Om here all alone tonight
Hold me up to the light
Baby what do ya see inside
Be lookin thru my soul
Right to the otha side o’ me
Extremely bitter cold
Like no one else’s out to sea
Aw come on baby love
Om that way cos ya neva here
But in the smoke above
As we both choke n disappear
My heart afire arcs
Santana wind bone dry emote
Becoming ash n sparks
Another lonely night afloat
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 31st Oct 2019
| Edited 1st Nov 2019
Author's Note
California wildfires & evacuations keep love apart.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Wildfire
Anonymous
31st Oct 2019 1:46pm
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Thank you for coming here for the read. Sweetheart. <3
But oh no! No I didn’t flag this one. It’s been happening too often lately...
Update: I contacted a Mod and now the tag is removed, yaaay!🐾🔥
But oh no! No I didn’t flag this one. It’s been happening too often lately...
Update: I contacted a Mod and now the tag is removed, yaaay!🐾🔥
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
31st Oct 2019 6:52pm
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1st Nov 2019 1:26pm
Why thank you Poet, and yes, very much a song... you heard the lyrical connection.
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Re. Wildfire
31st Oct 2019 8:34pm
I agree it does have a sonorous quality that would lend to a capella performance or a musical accompaniment. <3
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Thank you so much, my friend, and that’s what it is. But it’s not a write I wanted to mark as a hashtag song or lyrics. I wanted that to be more subtle to the reader. I felt I didn’t need to spell it out. ( :
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Re. Wildfire
31st Oct 2019 10:06pm
TAGGED IT...to label any mention of a verboten subject as dangerous, I suspect... Damn wanna be authoritarian wimps...I love your rhyming skills...perhaps from now on your forcibly magic markered extremist verses will simply be too much truth for our neo-Trotskyites to bear...
so keep it up, hottie free thinker
J
so keep it up, hottie free thinker
J
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1st Nov 2019 1:35pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
31st Oct 2019 11:25pm
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Re: Re. Wildfire
1st Nov 2019 1:40pm
Aaw lovely sister, how much you have warmed me on this cold morning.
Thank you🔥
Thank you🔥
Re. Wildfire
1st Nov 2019 2:38am
Dear JP,
I enjoyed rapping to this! Really well done, as per!
How do you know if you’ve been tagged for an infraction? This is hardly incendiary. Well, pay no never mind. It’s fabulous! H🌷
I enjoyed rapping to this! Really well done, as per!
How do you know if you’ve been tagged for an infraction? This is hardly incendiary. Well, pay no never mind. It’s fabulous! H🌷
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Re: Re. Wildfire
1st Nov 2019 1:48pm
Thank you so much, sweet sister H...
I love to dance in the enlightenment of your words!
music’s in the air,
always
Jade🔥
( it’s okay now, the ECW was taken off - it means extreme content, hardly applying to this particular ink )
I love to dance in the enlightenment of your words!
music’s in the air,
always
Jade🔥
( it’s okay now, the ECW was taken off - it means extreme content, hardly applying to this particular ink )
Re. Wildfire
2nd Nov 2019 1:23am
and the fires continue carried by the devil winds.
excellent write Ms. Jade.
excellent write Ms. Jade.
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2nd Nov 2019 2:35am
Aah thank you so much, dear Wally... and yes, they still continue until the winds are quelled.
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Re. Wildfire
2nd Nov 2019 1:45pm
I didn't have any expectations, (policy, peeps) when I read it but I was really impressed with the evocative wording in the last 4 lines.... damn. It's easy to remember why people adore your words. Such engaging, descriptive, pictorial feeling.
I'm your fan yesterday, today and tomorrow. I need a book or three of yours!
I'm your fan yesterday, today and tomorrow. I need a book or three of yours!
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Thank you, dear Edible one... hmm, “edible”... I suddenly wanna nickname you ‘Edie’ - any thoughts?
I’d love to have someone put my next book together. It’s been too long, and I’ve collected a whole new collection of poetry since coming to the Deep.
I’ll pm you shortly.🐾
RL graditude 🙏🏻
I’d love to have someone put my next book together. It’s been too long, and I’ve collected a whole new collection of poetry since coming to the Deep.
I’ll pm you shortly.🐾
RL graditude 🙏🏻
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2nd Nov 2019 4:21pm
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2nd Nov 2019 4:25pm