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Beauty Sat In Front
Beauty sat in front of me today
Her hair hung down her shoulders
Her eyes piercing his heart
A light shone on this dark night
The light of her laptop casting a romantic shadow on her face
Lost in the thoughts of her studies
The romance of her ambition
A spark of inspiration grew
A doc opened and words started to type
Beauty sat in front of me today
Beauty that inspired this poem
Her hair hung down her shoulders
Her eyes piercing his heart
A light shone on this dark night
The light of her laptop casting a romantic shadow on her face
Lost in the thoughts of her studies
The romance of her ambition
A spark of inspiration grew
A doc opened and words started to type
Beauty sat in front of me today
Beauty that inspired this poem
Published 28th Oct 2019
Author's Note
Well when inspiration hits one just has to write
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28th Oct 2019 1:51am
Aww, so happy you caught some inspiration & thank goodness she sat in the front.
It's like serendipity. Hopefully more becomes of the story!💜
It's like serendipity. Hopefully more becomes of the story!💜
28th Oct 2019 3:16am
I never show the girls the poems I write about them so sadly nothing will go further but it does feel really nice to have been inspired as it has been a while since I have been. You women are always inspiring : )
28th Oct 2019 3:20am
this got me in my feelings..
i was in this exact situation
exept i guess you could i was beauty
because he was looking at me.. <3
amazing poem
i was in this exact situation
exept i guess you could i was beauty
because he was looking at me.. <3
amazing poem
Glad it got you feeling something as I try to write with that in mind. I was looking right at her and writing at the same time. Thanks for the comment and the RL add : )
28th Oct 2019 3:27am
28th Oct 2019 3:48am
Wonder what I would write about a girl sitting in front of me at a Timmies : ) thanks for the comment LG
28th Oct 2019 6:36pm
22nd Nov 2019 6:23am
Musicians and poets equal hopeless romantics : ) thanks for the comment Sweet O
22nd Nov 2019 3:18am
22nd Nov 2019 6:24am
