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Sentimental Me...
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 18th Oct 2019
| Edited 6th Jul 2020
Author's Note
Copyright © 2019 PandoraUnleashed. All rights reserved.
This was originally for the "Visual Obsessions" comp that my crowded thoughts let slip from posting... It's not too poetic, but my first time tinkering with the nonet form
This was originally for the "Visual Obsessions" comp that my crowded thoughts let slip from posting... It's not too poetic, but my first time tinkering with the nonet form
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
18th Oct 2019 12:25pm
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18th Oct 2019 1:58pm
It's most appreciated...thank you. I'm usually the girl with too many syllables, but had to get the bigger words in to complete my count on this one. It does make me want to do more nonets, and challenge myself to the more difficult one( forgot the name) that repeats over in reverse afterwards...
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18th Oct 2019 8:25pm
Pandora - is the name you are looking for for a poem that reads same backwards PALINDROME?
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19th Oct 2019 7:02am
Solomon, the best I can explain is perhaps, it's a mirrored or shadowed form. The syllabus starts below the last line with one, and downward to a count of nine. The idea is to have them matching to form a perfect form. I think my OCD would go crazy with that measure. I need to check with cabcool, I don't follow him, but see them all the time in the feed. Thanks for the help, buddy!🙏
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Anonymous
18th Oct 2019 3:03pm
I'm taking this beauty home with me...
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
18th Oct 2019 3:07pm
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19th Oct 2019 7:06am
Yes ma'am. 👀
I'm all about owning myself and even thriving off having a rule bender attitude. I'll start giving myself more credit. Thank you for the reminder, beautiful!🌷❤
I'm all about owning myself and even thriving off having a rule bender attitude. I'll start giving myself more credit. Thank you for the reminder, beautiful!🌷❤
Re. Sentimental Me...
18th Oct 2019 3:47pm
Agree with hrshykss. Rich in emotion and I think the write worked nicely in that style.
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19th Oct 2019 7:07am
Thank you. I can always count on you to appreciate something I may not see. The power of this family, eh?!;)
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 10:45am
18th Oct 2019 9:23pm
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19th Oct 2019 7:10am
Well damn, am I stoked you found enough beauty, to not only address it, but give me an add...
... thank you, thank you, thank you!
... thank you, thank you, thank you!
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18th Oct 2019 11:19pm
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19th Oct 2019 7:12am
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19th Oct 2019 7:13am
Thank you for the positive assessment, chickie!!! Appreciate it muchly....
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20th Oct 2019 7:42pm
Eyes often sting as they well with sentiment and nostalgia. They are the second casualty ....the first is always the heart.
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25th Oct 2019 9:27pm
You got that right...Damn that heart! I read an oldie about my mama last night. Crappy write & a crappy move too. Lol.
I'm sorry this has been overlooked, I only saw it when notified of a newer comment. Thanks for the support as always! Many hugs & blessings across the sea to you....
I'm sorry this has been overlooked, I only saw it when notified of a newer comment. Thanks for the support as always! Many hugs & blessings across the sea to you....
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22nd Oct 2019 12:52pm
You have climbed the mountain of depression and found the summit of creative catharsis. I read this three times and took it all in like a poetic high. You really have learned the art of taking sadness and creating brilliance.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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25th Oct 2019 9:31pm
I appreciate that recognition given it's never been any easy genre, or one I wanted to challenge. However, I've been weaving more darkness. It feels good for a change. See you soon!
...many hugs filled with
thankfulness, John;)
...many hugs filled with
thankfulness, John;)
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
31st Oct 2019 2:01pm
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31st Oct 2019 6:54pm
Appreciate muchly & thanks for the reassurance too..sometimes I don't give myself enough credit!
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
31st Oct 2019 11:37pm
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