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dark inside a cave
im a monster inside a cage
im all full of rage
im ready to attack
so you better put up your fist
your the first one on my list
you called out a fight
so use all your might
you'll die in the snow
and nobody will know
im all full of rage
im ready to attack
so you better put up your fist
your the first one on my list
you called out a fight
so use all your might
you'll die in the snow
and nobody will know
Published 22nd Dec 2011
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Anonymous
22nd Dec 2011 10:19pm
this should be in the anger poems section, not the dark poetry one...other than that, pretty decent...but I feel it needs more meat to satisfy my monstrous urges..."laughs"
23rd Dec 2011 2:40am
you have any ideas for me to add on cuz im out of things to say and i didnt spend any time on it really so i'm working on something darker than this.
