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When the window fogs over
from my staggered breaths
and I can no longer see you
walking away, when I am sure you
cannot hear me,
then,
I'll whisper I love you.
from my staggered breaths
and I can no longer see you
walking away, when I am sure you
cannot hear me,
then,
I'll whisper I love you.
Published 10th Oct 2019
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
10th Oct 2019 6:56am
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10th Oct 2019 12:33pm
Thank you HF
I try to say the most in the least amount of
words because I feel like the attention
span of humans isnt what it was 200 years ago and if I want my poem or story felt
it has to be minamal.
I try to say the most in the least amount of
words because I feel like the attention
span of humans isnt what it was 200 years ago and if I want my poem or story felt
it has to be minamal.
10th Oct 2019 10:23am
10th Oct 2019 12:33pm
10th Oct 2019 11:03am
How often have we all done this to protect ourselves from rejection.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
10th Oct 2019 12:41pm
10th Oct 2019 2:26pm
Oh bravo - a beautiful little vignette of imagery here. I can visualize it as though I am watching it unfold.
10th Oct 2019 6:01pm
