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Letter to Vee
I remember vying for your heart’s vacancy...
We’d watch Vicar of Dibley, and I’d wait
and see if the vulgar vignettes brought
a change in condition- would you
laugh with abandon of your own
volition? I’d vow from my
vantage point- beanbag’s
soft swells- that these
cheap veneer walls
would have stories
to tell! ...Now it's
been fiVe years,
my irrepressible
Vee, so I vainly
ask you, does
your heart
vie for
me
?
We’d watch Vicar of Dibley, and I’d wait
and see if the vulgar vignettes brought
a change in condition- would you
laugh with abandon of your own
volition? I’d vow from my
vantage point- beanbag’s
soft swells- that these
cheap veneer walls
would have stories
to tell! ...Now it's
been fiVe years,
my irrepressible
Vee, so I vainly
ask you, does
your heart
vie for
me
?
Published 7th Oct 2019
Author's Note
For the letter V competition
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clever composition, enough that the emphasis on the letter V doesn't get in the way of the meaning of the poem. in fact, i read it all first before even realising the v was being used FOR this reason
edited to add: shape!
edited to add: shape!
7th Oct 2019 7:29pm
