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Good-night Granny
The saddest sounds of loss
moans, cries, and gasps.
Tears pour down wrinkled cheeks
onto hospital sheets in a last desperate
plea for life.
moans, cries, and gasps.
Tears pour down wrinkled cheeks
onto hospital sheets in a last desperate
plea for life.
Published 3rd Oct 2019
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3rd Oct 2019 2:06am
oh my goodness beautiful Nikki
hold on lovely poetess sending my love for you
I know nothing I can say can really help
just wanted you to know you're not alone...
courage dear one...
love Brenda ❤
hold on lovely poetess sending my love for you
I know nothing I can say can really help
just wanted you to know you're not alone...
courage dear one...
love Brenda ❤
3rd Oct 2019 2:11am
It's just all weird. People are not forever.
I have the most in common with her. We are both cold ladies. I just want her to slip away not suffer. It will be her birthday at midnight. October 3rd.
I have the most in common with her. We are both cold ladies. I just want her to slip away not suffer. It will be her birthday at midnight. October 3rd.
3rd Oct 2019 2:15am
that's really rough Nikki she will go her own way it sounds like she's a tough lady...you are a unique woman not cold to me just honest...
hugs beautiful ❤
hugs beautiful ❤
3rd Oct 2019 2:19am
3rd Oct 2019 3:38am
I am sorry for this experience, but happy you are there with her, Nikki. May she pass in peace and bequeath as much to those who love her.
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