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Murderous Doula
All Creation groans, as in childbirth.
We push her head ever deeper in the birthing pool.
Published 2nd Oct 2019
Author's Note
For the two sentence horror comp.
Romans 8:22.
Romans 8:22.
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
2nd Oct 2019 1:52pm
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2nd Oct 2019 4:26pm
At one point, this concept was trying to be a longer poem but I ran out of steam. Two sentences is just about all I can wrangle at the moment!
Thanks.
Thanks.
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
4th Oct 2019 3:14am
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4th Oct 2019 3:20am
Thanks, HF! My ink seems to be in proportion to my spare time....
Gotta admit, the two-sentence thing is appealing. I've had a few others flit in & out of my mind at odd moments since I wrote this one. Haven't managed to pin them down on a page yet though.
Gotta admit, the two-sentence thing is appealing. I've had a few others flit in & out of my mind at odd moments since I wrote this one. Haven't managed to pin them down on a page yet though.
2nd Oct 2019 9:48pm
this indeed a piece of art...for me as it delivers so much
in the before and after of the text on the screen!
in the before and after of the text on the screen!
3rd Oct 2019 2:11am
Thank you. I also got quite caught up in the horror of the idea... someone who is supposed to be absolutely trustworthy and helpful, turning out to be quite the opposite...
It's almost better as just a two sentence snippet than it was when I was trying to make more of it. More room for the imagination to run....
Much obliged for the comment and RL add. :)
It's almost better as just a two sentence snippet than it was when I was trying to make more of it. More room for the imagination to run....
Much obliged for the comment and RL add. :)
