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Drawn To Her Window
And there she is
framed by the moon,
that satin gown
conforming to each
generous curve
Only a window
separates us
and the more I enjoy her
in that purple light,
the more apt I am
to bust through that barrier
navigating shards
of broken glass,
to place my hands
to her skin
to meet her tantalizing mouth
driving every inch of my love
into the core
of the unspoken suggestion
no longer a barrier
but an opening
to dine
in our unrestrained madness,
our carnal appetites
curing a feast
that need be abated
My breath heavy,
contained grunts
spilling volume
through the room,
calming the tension
in the only sure way we can
Each time I walk by,
framed by the moon
in her pose of patience
we are both aware.
framed by the moon,
that satin gown
conforming to each
generous curve
Only a window
separates us
and the more I enjoy her
in that purple light,
the more apt I am
to bust through that barrier
navigating shards
of broken glass,
to place my hands
to her skin
to meet her tantalizing mouth
driving every inch of my love
into the core
of the unspoken suggestion
no longer a barrier
but an opening
to dine
in our unrestrained madness,
our carnal appetites
curing a feast
that need be abated
My breath heavy,
contained grunts
spilling volume
through the room,
calming the tension
in the only sure way we can
Each time I walk by,
framed by the moon
in her pose of patience
we are both aware.
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Re. Drawn To Her Window
27th Sep 2019 2:06am
Mm... such a beautiful choice of spoken words when the heart aches for them the most, You truly are such a great inspiration my love, please take that into consideration, and much love to you always my tender poet, Enjoy your evening as well
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Re: Re. Drawn To Her Window
27th Sep 2019 2:13am
It is a window, that leads to much delight. Inspiration is a lovely exchange that is beautifully reflected in our connection. And to you, sweetness.
Re: Re. Drawn To Her Window
27th Sep 2019 2:23am
Talk to me big daddy this sweet poetess is listening, kiss me, close your eyes, and move in closer, mm...let me whisper how I really feel about you in you ear.... Yes... for a long time now.... now slow dance with me ..mmm
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Re: Re. Drawn To Her Window
27th Sep 2019 2:55am
Hands to your hips, keeping you snug as we glide gracefully to the jukebox. Those pecks to my neck are driving me.. slow breaths, easy does it.
Re: Re. Drawn To Her Window
27th Sep 2019 3:01am
Hand creeping downward....you know to see if you are feeling this as much as I am, my inner thigh moving up your pants leg, your lips increasing on mine... breathless.. mmm you feel that... baby you suppose to be mingling …okay one more kiss...mmm...oh yes... now go... mingle while I pull my dress down.... tiger...wink...go
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Re: Re. Drawn To Her Window
27th Sep 2019 3:51am
Impossible to mingle, given the tingle, feeling the high, in that graze of thigh, lips not stopping, panties dropping, gripping your bum, a flick of my thumb...the playlist curating, and neither of us fading...
Think you'd be better served to pull that dress higher, as it appears to me, seems we both are on fire.
Think you'd be better served to pull that dress higher, as it appears to me, seems we both are on fire.
Re: Re. Drawn To Her Window
27th Sep 2019 6:51pm
Re. Drawn To Her Window
27th Sep 2019 7:09am
Hot. That desire to smash the window expressed here reminds me of a scene in the movie Body Heat, when William Hurt breaks through the glass of a door to get at Kathleen Turner.
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Re: Re. Drawn To Her Window
27th Sep 2019 11:17am
Thanks, Solomon. Probably been thirty years since I saw that movie. Don't remember the scene, though wasn't it quite racy for it's time?
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27th Sep 2019 9:21am
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Re. Drawn To Her Window
28th Sep 2019 5:57am
This is an incredibly hot write...damn! I love how "driving every inch of my love
into the core
of the unspoken suggestion" turns to " no longer a barrier
but an opening
to dine "
.....clever job with your analogy there, my friend! I know it wasn't a complete refrain, but I loved the moon statement tying the beginning to the end too.
into the core
of the unspoken suggestion" turns to " no longer a barrier
but an opening
to dine "
.....clever job with your analogy there, my friend! I know it wasn't a complete refrain, but I loved the moon statement tying the beginning to the end too.
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Re: Re. Drawn To Her Window
28th Sep 2019 2:48pm
The moon always has that appeal, doesn't it? Glad you found it has the right balance of sizzle to keep your attention and thanks for the encouraging commentary. Nobody likes a barrier.
Re. Drawn To Her Window
28th Sep 2019 6:54pm
Love it.
The Voyeur and the Exhibitionist.
For what good is a work of art if no one sees it and is moved to passionate dreams?
The Voyeur and the Exhibitionist.
For what good is a work of art if no one sees it and is moved to passionate dreams?
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Re: Re. Drawn To Her Window
28th Sep 2019 8:51pm
So true, Fat Boy 3000 Plus. Some things are meant to be seen beneath the gaze of the passionate eye.