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Coruscation
Freedom is a funny thing
Perspective of eyes
Family lore
History
When a candle flickers
we assume
the light burns
still burns strong
it’s just a light gale
Some tapers
or tea cups
sparkle
for our benefit
public assurances
Sometimes
the flicker
signals
the struggle
keepsake
keeping
the flame
alive
When the fuel
no longer combusts
too painful
to spark
…
it is time
to
twinkle
;;;
no longer
flickering
another
star
twinkles
is now
at
ease
Published 25th Sep 2019
Author's Note
In remembrance of our Brother Poet, LiamReedus
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25th Sep 2019 8:35pm
25th Sep 2019 8:40pm
I struggled to spill
in between tears
i didn't know Liam that well
but.....
must be the empath thing.
thank You
appreciate You reading and RL
in between tears
i didn't know Liam that well
but.....
must be the empath thing.
thank You
appreciate You reading and RL
25th Sep 2019 8:43pm
He was a good person battling demons. Sometimes we can control them, other times we cannot. One thing is for certain - it's NO ONE's fault when an adult commits suicide.
25th Sep 2019 9:41pm
i struggle with this everyday
and yes
no one's fault
& no one who has never.........
can truly know what is going on
the candle flickers and so we assume
life
but not all candles flicker to struggle towards flame
This is why i believe emotional and mental pain is far worse than physical (& i've endured some REAL physical shit)
and yes
no one's fault
& no one who has never.........
can truly know what is going on
the candle flickers and so we assume
life
but not all candles flicker to struggle towards flame
This is why i believe emotional and mental pain is far worse than physical (& i've endured some REAL physical shit)
25th Sep 2019 8:58pm
25th Sep 2019 9:42pm
Anonymous
25th Sep 2019 9:45pm
It's important to honour all lights...we never know how closely one could be to burning out. This is beautiful, Tallen
25th Sep 2019 9:51pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
25th Sep 2019 10:33pm
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25th Sep 2019 10:37pm
25th Sep 2019 11:57pm
25th Sep 2019 11:59pm
26th Sep 2019 5:34am
26th Sep 2019 3:04pm
26th Sep 2019 8:14am
didn't know that man at all but i can see and feel the impact he's had on those around me.
just keeping everyone in my meditation.
just keeping everyone in my meditation.
26th Sep 2019 3:04pm
Anonymous
26th Sep 2019 11:14am
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26th Sep 2019 3:05pm
27th Sep 2019 8:27pm
27th Sep 2019 8:32pm
I spilled this before i began an all day and night cry
Some passings affect me more
You writers hold a special place inside of me
and well...........
thank You for the kind words
Honored for the FL add
Some passings affect me more
You writers hold a special place inside of me
and well...........
thank You for the kind words
Honored for the FL add
2nd Nov 2019 1:23am
2nd Nov 2019 12:41pm
I cried for a spell
when i heard that our Brother Poet
had died.
thank You for the read and share
when i heard that our Brother Poet
had died.
thank You for the read and share
