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Success
without critique and hate
success never comes
it is all in balance
you trip and you fall.
listen to the voice inside
practice patience, confront defeat
carrying your way out
through the distant slopes
be hopeful and stopping never
even after reaching the toughest goal.
Published 24th Sep 2019
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27th Sep 2019 3:18am
Nicely done. I think most people give up when they fail not thinking failures are life lessons. Determination is the key.
Look forward to seeing more of your work.
Look forward to seeing more of your work.
27th Sep 2019 1:15pm
21st Dec 2020 2:02pm
Yes, it was patience that allowed the turtle to beat the rabbit. Thanks for the reminder. Peace. oral
28th Dec 2020 3:05pm
