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sometimes you have
Published 17th Sep 2019
Author's Note
For the Rupi Kaur comp, inspired by her poetry in general but with a real connection to the style of this one:
https://me.me/i/i-do-not-need-the-kind-of-love-that-is-d82180f119624ede9904bed003286295
https://me.me/i/i-do-not-need-the-kind-of-love-that-is-d82180f119624ede9904bed003286295
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17th Sep 2019 5:40pm
17th Sep 2019 5:43pm
Thank you ahavati. The first time I read Rupi Kaur, I immediately felt a huge connection (honestly I was like, hey, you've been writing my poems!). For this comp, I figured that at some point I would write something that would work, and thankfully, last night it did.
17th Sep 2019 5:46pm
We are allowing two entries for these classics - so feel free to have a go again!
17th Sep 2019 5:50pm
17th Sep 2019 5:46pm
17th Sep 2019 5:50pm
Thanks Jade. My first attempts at the cocoon sucked, and I finally found a reference image with the wings visible. I'm always happy when you feel my words (and make me smile with the RL add!)
17th Sep 2019 6:37pm
17th Sep 2019 5:51pm
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18th Sep 2019 1:30am
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21st Sep 2019 11:20am
It actually made me kinda sad. :( But an en excellent entry nonetheless. Good luck in the challenge, Satin!
