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it is so full here in myself
( after Rupi Kaur )
you have never known a creature as myself
i grew from the soil
all else was born from my secrets
overflowing from my belly as wilderness
and from my long dark hair as rain
but also like a tiger
much preparation went into
this honeyed defiance
to take it seriously
yet my skin is rosewood and i have
cultured the sandalwood from myself
but that does not mean
i will be tamed
you have never known a creature as myself
i grew from the soil
all else was born from my secrets
overflowing from my belly as wilderness
and from my long dark hair as rain
but also like a tiger
much preparation went into
this honeyed defiance
to take it seriously
yet my skin is rosewood and i have
cultured the sandalwood from myself
but that does not mean
i will be tamed
Published 11th Sep 2019
Author's Note
Inspired by Kaur’s
https://www.instagram.com/p/BecKjCeAObs/
My second entry for the Classic Corner tribute “the sun and her flowers”, hosted by Ahavati & JohnnyBlaze.
https://www.instagram.com/p/BecKjCeAObs/
My second entry for the Classic Corner tribute “the sun and her flowers”, hosted by Ahavati & JohnnyBlaze.
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11th Sep 2019 3:46am
Dear J-P,
Lovely. I’m pretty sure one of your entries will be winner and the other one runner up.
Good luck but you don’t need it ;-). H🌷
Lovely. I’m pretty sure one of your entries will be winner and the other one runner up.
Good luck but you don’t need it ;-). H🌷
11th Sep 2019 3:55am
Dearest H, your beautiful sentiment is a kindness I accept from you humbly as its own reward for my efforts. *tears up*
Jade🙏🏻
Jade🙏🏻
11th Sep 2019 4:03am
never, but never be tamed. For it is in
such things as our true natures that make up the substances of the stars .
hugs,
buddhakitty.
such things as our true natures that make up the substances of the stars .
hugs,
buddhakitty.
11th Sep 2019 4:19am
Thank you so much.
Yes, my dear Kitty... Carl Sagan himself said that we are literally “made of star stuff”.
Tiger hugs,
Jade
Yes, my dear Kitty... Carl Sagan himself said that we are literally “made of star stuff”.
Tiger hugs,
Jade
11th Sep 2019 4:27am
This is so pretty and it fits with your wild tiger theme, woman theme expressed fully..
11th Sep 2019 4:44am
Thank you so much, dear sister PR, I’m honored & moved by how my effort has touched. I’ve always felt fortunate anytime you’ve graced me with your words & presence.
always
Jade
always
Jade
12th Sep 2019 11:14am
My flushed thanks, dear Kathy, for the RL honor, and your thoughts. My best to you.
11th Sep 2019 5:17pm
That takes the biscuit (high compliment northern expression)
... and a great title alluding to "choosing life".
... and a great title alluding to "choosing life".
12th Sep 2019 11:18am
Thank you, dear Josh, for your kindness & generousity. It’s good to see you stop in.
11th Sep 2019 7:38pm
12th Sep 2019 11:23am
Yes! A Bengal tiger to be exact - my medicine animal.
I thank you most graciously, dear Wally, for coming in for a read & for showing your appreciation of my effort.🐅
I thank you most graciously, dear Wally, for coming in for a read & for showing your appreciation of my effort.🐅
The descriptors paint a very organic, earthy portrait. Metaphors are intriguing. I've been sitting here a while thinking about them. Overall I feel like the write is about self love and acceptance and has a lovely energy about it. <3
Thank you, Daniel. How you immerce as you so often do when taking in the layers of another poet’s work - you turn my art into another concept of art through your unique insight and the currents encountered. For me, it’s almost its own event. A be-in.
12th Sep 2019 4:12pm
Aw *hugs* I hope you're feeling better honey. Love and light to you. 😘💖
13th Sep 2019 3:33am
I’m definitely trying. The extreme temps are in the midst of returning so the fight continues. The break in all this should be back in flux around mid next week.
Thank you so much for your well wishes, my friend. And I’m grateful Dorian left you & your home unscathed.🙏🏻
Thank you so much for your well wishes, my friend. And I’m grateful Dorian left you & your home unscathed.🙏🏻
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14th Sep 2019 6:31pm
*blinks*
My goodness...
I wasn’t sure where you were going at first, HF.
But I thank you for what you wound up investing in your comment - For your words.
My goodness...
I wasn’t sure where you were going at first, HF.
But I thank you for what you wound up investing in your comment - For your words.
15th Sep 2019 1:46am
16th Sep 2019 00:50am
"... overflowing from my belly as wilderness
and from my long dark hair as rain ..."
"this honeyed defiance"
"... that does not mean... i will be tamed..."
... 👌👍😍
and from my long dark hair as rain ..."
"this honeyed defiance"
"... that does not mean... i will be tamed..."
... 👌👍😍
16th Sep 2019 1:00am
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