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emo
sadness spins...it turns me out
pimped emo feelings dance for you
fully on display pain for your amusement
toy with me with your disdain
angry protestors of the heart--
hold picket signs
like fuck him
just forget the prick
and you don't need him
little lonely emo cunts tricked out
affection withheld and I'm a bitch
what do you know about being a woman?
predatory desires lie
conned into the act
we did the deed
now you act like nothing...
when these hookers are working for you
hustling the streets of the void paying your ego
I go hungry in the wasteland of denial
while you sit fat and sassy on your God trip
fuck...
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Re. emo
7th Sep 2019 8:30am
This is some piercing writing.. Left me wanting to smash something (don't worry that happens sometimes - I never do)
Wonderfully written, and so very very real.
Delanee.
Wonderfully written, and so very very real.
Delanee.
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7th Sep 2019 1:41pm
thank you beautiful Delanee for feeling this poem so deeply... I appreciate you greatly...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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7th Sep 2019 11:06pm
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7th Sep 2019 11:09pm
lol thank you beautiful Mysterious One I'm so bad at doing stuff like that when I'm upset there is a fear in me that if I let go of my pain and anger I won't be able to stop myself and it will keep coming... maybe I'll rip up some papers start there and see what happens or do some target practise...I just feel hurt and sad... I deeply appreciate you being here...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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8th Sep 2019 5:10am
Ive always been a fan of write said person that caused these feelings a letter. Hand written. Read it aloud, then burn that shit. Gone. Hugs and love to you sweetest. We all feel hurt and sad at times. <3
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8th Sep 2019 5:27am
thank you beautiful Mysterious One that's a great idea though I'm too chicken to hand it to them... I rather just vent here and then hide them because I realized I was just venting later...
love you lady...
love Brenda 💕
love you lady...
love Brenda 💕
Re. emo
7th Sep 2019 11:15am
very powerful as it is filled with raw and uncut emotions of street life were its a daily struggle....nicely spilled
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Re: Re. emo
7th Sep 2019 1:41pm
thank you graciously dearest Stoney for the love on this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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7th Sep 2019 3:22pm
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7th Sep 2019 3:29pm
Re. emo
7th Sep 2019 4:32pm
I agree with what was already said. First stanza draws you right into it's energy, raw and potent. Palpable vitriol throughout.
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Re: Re. emo
7th Sep 2019 4:50pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel for such a beautiful comment I always smile when you visit my pages...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. emo
7th Sep 2019 5:06pm
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7th Sep 2019 5:21pm
giggles thank you dearest Poet for inserting your truth and humor here...you know better then to believe I'm the innocent party here...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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7th Sep 2019 7:40pm
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7th Sep 2019 10:02pm
I do too dearest Poet I'm a blonde brooding type but I've always had a thing for the dark haired emo types like Ally Sheedy in the breakfast club...I think my spirit is a dark brooding beauty stuck in a blonde bimbo's body lol...
I'm happy you dug this one... I love your sexy comment about needing discipline ❤
I'm happy you dug this one... I love your sexy comment about needing discipline ❤
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7th Sep 2019 5:09pm
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Re. emo
7th Sep 2019 6:51pm
Lol i thought emo was the liitle red dude from seasame street read went way different then i expected
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Re: Re. emo
7th Sep 2019 6:53pm
lol I forgot about him... emo is also a term for emotional...so given that context it might make more sense you're too cute giggles... thank you for the read and comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. emo
7th Sep 2019 10:43pm
I love both dearest Ethan goth and emo it would be my style if I weren't so blonde... I'm always happy when you visit my pages with your thoughts even on sad occasions you bring me smiles... thank you beautiful Ethan for the love here it's felt...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. emo
7th Sep 2019 11:39pm
aw thank you dearest Ethan Camden town sounds lovely I'm in California myself nothing glamorous just a small dairy town...it's quiet here and everyone know everyone...if everyone is as awesome as you I would be in great company ❤
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