SENRYU - REVERIE 001

As I noticed obsession in the themes & you're authors note, I had to giggle. There's no such thing as a much too fertile imagination! This is also one sexy senryu too, there is something about "pink rising" that captivates me. I may steal that & use it in a couple months. Just kidding!;)

Ha ha...I think you're right about imagination. Although some may not appreciate the harvest 😁 I saw your profile online and thought I have to write something you'd enjoy. Yeah, I thought "pink rising" is much more sensual and romantic then my first inclination, "pink protrudes."  🙃 Although pretty titillating too. Amazing the length of a comment response for a little ol' 17 syllables...therein lies the potential profundity of the style. 🙏💕🙂

Write until your heart is content if you're wishing for me to enjoy it. You never miss the mark! Pink protruding is a good one, but perhaps better in a full piece. But damn, pink rising says MORE!

I just now remembered the day I apologized for not commenting because I didn't understand what you were writing.... *FACEPALM* I had so much to learn back then, thanks for hanging in there with me. I was thinking about the many pieces of people that have helped me develop my style & you're on the list...it feels great to go from "cunt to parted pink";)

..Senryu's are your thing, now that I know what they are.....you rock every single one of those 17 syllables too! 💋

You're poetry is amazing and genuine ...agree "parted pink" is, to me, more sensual, more seductive. And a beautiful picture.

Thank you🙂

Thank you so much, Tim! I try to maintain the beauty without graphic representations which can take it from the realm of poetry.

"pink rising" - "titillating" words choice, to share your own comment.

One of my favorite words that "titillating," 😁 thank you, Solomon.

I know many a men who wish they felt as fertile, Gahddess!  I like the imagery here.  

Ha ha 😁 Thank you Ahavati! It's my imagination that's fertile...no
comment on my physiology 😁🙏

Crisp ... tight ... bravo my poet ...

Thank you Soledad! I am glad you enjoyed the piece. Crisp and tight...but did it evoke any feeling, emotion? That's kinda rhetorical...if I know you it did.

Ahh, but imagination is the most beautiful playground...is it not?   :-)

That it definitely is! Thank you, Ash!

You have a knack for this, Gahddess.

Takes talent to write the sensual no matter how many words deployed.

Thank you so much, Johnny! That really does enciurage me to continue writing the sensual pieces because they just seem to flow.

Thank you Lovely! I'll keep on dream'in. It's a fascinating, often bizarre world, my imagination . But never dull 💥😁