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Putrefactive
internal
external
eternal
…………..
terminal
habitual
indolence
for me
bacterial slush
infecting my ink
attempting
to purge
i may be (maybe)
filtering my
(red) read & blue
spirit (purple)
to a hard watered
down translucence
oooooooooooze
……….
external
eternal
…………..
terminal
habitual
indolence
for me
bacterial slush
infecting my ink
attempting
to purge
i may be (maybe)
filtering my
(red) read & blue
spirit (purple)
to a hard watered
down translucence
oooooooooooze
……….
Published 1st Sep 2019
Author's Note
New Focus from my morning email subscription:
Resolving Conflict with Mindfulness
When we resolve something with mindfulness, we can let it go and free ourselves from its power. The resolution of such a conflict leads us to contemplate what life is about.
—Ajahn Sumedho, “The Gift of Gratitude”
Resolving Conflict with Mindfulness
When we resolve something with mindfulness, we can let it go and free ourselves from its power. The resolution of such a conflict leads us to contemplate what life is about.
—Ajahn Sumedho, “The Gift of Gratitude”
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
1st Sep 2019 3:03am
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1st Sep 2019 5:00am
As far as relatability goes, my spirit is purple too.
I like your groove, even when it swings negative. I'm positive of that. " <<<<<----- Yeah Your are
& i appreciate that (You) and i like this a lot about You.
I don't think You're being as brutally honest as You CAN be but will accept what You bring to the picnic.
thank You
Anonymous
1st Sep 2019 12:37pm
You have a playful spirit and it shows in your wordplay. I'm not sure what this laziness is you speak of. We're all writers here. Were not all athletes. An active mind is all you really need to live a rewarding experience. That's where the true magic happens.
I keep thinking i should be posting something
everyday and when i am not
i feel lazy and think maybe i've tapped out
with the liquid libations from within
My morning thought that i subscribe via email
has put me on a new path of thinking
and so perhaps i will spill about that.
Losing the Trees in the Amazon is affecting me more than i let on, i think
There is a great sadness among the Trees - even here in southern AZ
everyday and when i am not
i feel lazy and think maybe i've tapped out
with the liquid libations from within
My morning thought that i subscribe via email
has put me on a new path of thinking
and so perhaps i will spill about that.
Losing the Trees in the Amazon is affecting me more than i let on, i think
There is a great sadness among the Trees - even here in southern AZ
1st Sep 2019 7:24pm
Every great artist needs rest.
Give yourself a goddamn break, Mr. T!
We love you. You're worth the wait. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Give yourself a goddamn break, Mr. T!
We love you. You're worth the wait. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
1st Sep 2019 8:32pm
No idea when and why my sleep escapes me or forces me to lie down
You caused me to smile --
thank You
Beautiful
You caused me to smile --
thank You
Beautiful
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
3rd Sep 2019 5:01pm
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3rd Sep 2019 5:18pm
thank You
thank You
BROTHER!!! ...........for causing me to cracked up today!
I truly need / want more laughter in my life
You have the most thought provoking comments
(can be the makings of a terse / mini spill)
Huge eyelashes? You do know i am half Okinawan and many Asians have little hair on our bodies, right?
LOL
thank You
BROTHER!!! ...........for causing me to cracked up today!
I truly need / want more laughter in my life
You have the most thought provoking comments
(can be the makings of a terse / mini spill)
Huge eyelashes? You do know i am half Okinawan and many Asians have little hair on our bodies, right?
LOL
Anonymous
3rd Sep 2019 11:35pm
Damn, if I'd known there was a daily post rule...nah, that's not lazy. That's just life. We write when we're moved to, not on a time clock. I love the way you set this up and then ran it down
4th Sep 2019 00:09am
I am very relieved to know that i am not an
indolent dolt for not posting prolifically as
i thought we're supposed to be doing.
I may be a wee bit confused on the definition
of a good poet.
Your comments caused me to feel better about my writing and energy and so for this i thank You
indolent dolt for not posting prolifically as
i thought we're supposed to be doing.
I may be a wee bit confused on the definition
of a good poet.
Your comments caused me to feel better about my writing and energy and so for this i thank You
Anonymous
4th Sep 2019 00:50am
There is no definition of a "good poet," Tallen. It's subjective. Each reader connects differently to the words. Make them feel, make them think, make a connection...that's my definition of a good poet. :-)
4th Sep 2019 00:53am
