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A Little Less Fancy
Il n'y a pas besoin de mots fantaisistes
fancy doesn't excite me
I'm more of simplicity
lying down with reality
unfiltered
with a natural point of view
I am like the stream
moving thru life with ease
in every twist, bend or curve
my bottom crystal clear
showing of all that you'd like to see
I am a reflection of your moon
living as one with the sun
a lover of fortitude and valor
fermenting in your fortress
not allowed to be outshone
one sip, consumed
where vines have already known
wrapped, woven and twined
in every moment that has grown
fancy doesn't excite me
I'm more of simplicity
lying down with reality
unfiltered
with a natural point of view
I am like the stream
moving thru life with ease
in every twist, bend or curve
my bottom crystal clear
showing of all that you'd like to see
I am a reflection of your moon
living as one with the sun
a lover of fortitude and valor
fermenting in your fortress
not allowed to be outshone
one sip, consumed
where vines have already known
wrapped, woven and twined
in every moment that has grown
Published 29th Aug 2019
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Anonymous
29th Aug 2019 5:36pm
Damn...this is flat out perfect. Fancy intimidates the heck outta me. Gimme natural and true every time
29th Aug 2019 5:45pm
Exquisite -- 2nd to the last stanza -- Wow!
Simplicity allows us greater Freedom
to pursue (anything and or everything!)
Plus, it's kind of stressful to create the bells and whistles
wonderful feel to this spill, Brother
Simplicity allows us greater Freedom
to pursue (anything and or everything!)
Plus, it's kind of stressful to create the bells and whistles
wonderful feel to this spill, Brother
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
29th Aug 2019 6:23pm
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30th Aug 2019 3:05am
Great piece resonates deeply!
Right from the opening
"fancy doesn't excite me
I'm more of simplicity
lying down with reality
unfiltered
with a natural point of view "
Hell yea I feel the same way
Great write! 👏
Right from the opening
"fancy doesn't excite me
I'm more of simplicity
lying down with reality
unfiltered
with a natural point of view "
Hell yea I feel the same way
Great write! 👏
