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Give Me The Night
Give me the night
Where the moonlight shines
This is the beginning of paradise
Being close to you
Is the only place I want to be
Give me the night
Where we can fly together
Floating on our dreams
Fuelled by hidden desires
This is a heaven on Earth
Give me the night
Where the music plays in our hearts
A beat only we can dance to
Let the world fade away
While we gaze into eyes
Give me the night
Forget thinking go with our instinct
These urges are beautifully natural
The joy of discovering real love
When two become tangled into one
Published 24th Aug 2019
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24th Aug 2019 4:06pm
Heaven, on earth is the only place to be during those twilight hours, save right upon dusk & dawn !
This reads as a gorgeous melodic tune; with lyrics only those engaged in the moment can hear.
Bravo, dear poet... 🌻
This reads as a gorgeous melodic tune; with lyrics only those engaged in the moment can hear.
Bravo, dear poet... 🌻
24th Aug 2019 4:07pm
I really enjoyed the repetition of "Give me the night" in this, AP. It adds a lyrical quality to the reading; thus seems more a song of songs.
24th Aug 2019 5:08pm
24th Aug 2019 8:25pm
This is absolutely beautiful ! Lovin was made for the nighttime & your words took me there!
24th Aug 2019 8:42pm
Not in the same league as your latest poem but thank you for kind comment
