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I Miss Your Hands
I miss your hands
intertwined with mine
fingers running through my hair
tracing sparks down my spine
I miss you and your hands
shielding my lighter from the breeze
grazing your palms with my fingertips
feeling fire when you tease
I miss you
I want you
I hope that you're okay
I hope by some magic to hold your hand again someday
intertwined with mine
fingers running through my hair
tracing sparks down my spine
I miss you and your hands
shielding my lighter from the breeze
grazing your palms with my fingertips
feeling fire when you tease
I miss you
I want you
I hope that you're okay
I hope by some magic to hold your hand again someday
Published 24th Aug 2019
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26th Sep 2019 6:23pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
20th Oct 2019 11:34pm
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31st Oct 2019 2:20pm
I miss you and your hands
shielding my lighter from the breeze
grazing your palms with my fingertips
feeling fire when you tease --Great lines
I love the simplicity, vulnerability, and emphasis on hands and touch.
shielding my lighter from the breeze
grazing your palms with my fingertips
feeling fire when you tease --Great lines
I love the simplicity, vulnerability, and emphasis on hands and touch.
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
23rd Nov 2019 5:25pm
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2nd Dec 2019 4:08pm
30th Dec 2019 4:44pm
31st Dec 2019 1:21am
There is always hope of being with the one you want and love.
Unless they have passed away then memories and your heart will be the cage for your hope.
Unless they have passed away then memories and your heart will be the cage for your hope.
29th Mar 2020 2:12pm
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17th Dec 2021 2:05pm
Yearnsome wistful write. Favourite lines:
I miss you and your hands
shielding my lighter from the breeze [potential double entendre - lighter could be cig lighter or something on the body]
I miss you and your hands
shielding my lighter from the breeze [potential double entendre - lighter could be cig lighter or something on the body]
13th Jan 2022 10:59pm
Beautiful expression. Sometimes let go is better. The conspicuous absence is sweeter than the presence next to one we love. I had been.
Love,
KS
Love,
KS
19th Jan 2022 7:06am
27th Oct 2022 7:28pm
