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Pretzel Knot
Reins and ropes
and all things that hold
will not bind me any longer
I'll set us free into a daydream
it's gonna be better than this reality
at least it's what I want to believe
soaked in wine laying on the floor
in yesterday's clothes.
Published 23rd Aug 2019
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23rd Aug 2019 4:44pm
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- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
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23rd Aug 2019 8:32pm
23rd Aug 2019 11:24pm
Brava Nikki! This is a poignant piece. I had wondered why, as one who suffers from depression, do I get the urge to sleep so much. Dreams, glorious dreams! Alternate realities as you so well describe in this piece. I'm with Soledad when she says, "I too believe things will be better"
23rd Aug 2019 11:28pm
Thank you! ❤
Sleep is my vacation from everything.
Things always get better so they can get worse 😂😂
Sleep is my vacation from everything.
Things always get better so they can get worse 😂😂
23rd Aug 2019 11:42pm
Me too...'bout sleep. For some reason I'm always on trhe go in my dreams...always running to or from something.
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26th Aug 2019 3:23pm
This poem is making me thirsty... liked the final image too. If you're going to do something, you always get it done proper when you start yesterday. It's good to read your gritty lines again.
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