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Ablaze🔥
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I thought with faith I’d keep the light ablaze;
There’re things about myself I tried to fix.
The Reaper stood in black with cards it plays,
I threw my challenge down before his tricks.
There’s no way I’d give in without a fight,
I thought with faith I’d keep the light ablaze.
I stood my ground and showed I felt no fright,
The Reaper’s echoed words told of my days.
A feeling of resolve in my malaise
Came to me as I set forth strong demands.
I thought with faith I’d keep the light ablaze,
My birthright to control the shifting sands.
A grin of Reaper’s maw almost like hate,
The figure of my death begins to raise.
The sound of laughter finally seals my fate;
I thought with faith I’d keep the light ablaze.
I thought with faith I’d keep the light ablaze;
There’re things about myself I tried to fix.
The Reaper stood in black with cards it plays,
I threw my challenge down before his tricks.
There’s no way I’d give in without a fight,
I thought with faith I’d keep the light ablaze.
I stood my ground and showed I felt no fright,
The Reaper’s echoed words told of my days.
A feeling of resolve in my malaise
Came to me as I set forth strong demands.
I thought with faith I’d keep the light ablaze,
My birthright to control the shifting sands.
A grin of Reaper’s maw almost like hate,
The figure of my death begins to raise.
The sound of laughter finally seals my fate;
I thought with faith I’d keep the light ablaze.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 19th Aug 2019
Author's Note
For gothicsurrealism’s comp “Rage, Rage Against the Dying of the Light”
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Re. Ablaze
19th Aug 2019 8:59pm
Wicked. Utterly. Perfectly meets the brief too! Best of luck in the comp' xx
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Re: Re. Ablaze
19th Aug 2019 10:11pm
Thank you, Poppy, for your support & appreciation. It’s always good to see you. xo
Re. Ablaze
19th Aug 2019 11:52pm
Dear J-P,
The sound of clapping! I guess in the end we can’t outrun that Reaper. 😡
Well done and good luck in the comp! H🌷
The sound of clapping! I guess in the end we can’t outrun that Reaper. 😡
Well done and good luck in the comp! H🌷
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Re: Re. Ablaze
20th Aug 2019 00:07am
Why thank you, my dear H, for your wishes. It’s solid reason you pose as to how futile the battle with Death feels in the end. One should try. I watched my dad try, and he was a very strong man, in his faith & in his love of life.
I very much appreciate you coming by for a read and your thoughtful words.
Jade🙏🏻
I very much appreciate you coming by for a read and your thoughtful words.
Jade🙏🏻
Re: Re. Ablaze
20th Aug 2019 00:57am
Dear Jade,
Agreed, one should fight as hard as may be. Thank you for sharing about your dad. Your description of his strength and faith are a lovely homage to him and a lovely reflection of the talented daughter he raised. H🌷❤️
Agreed, one should fight as hard as may be. Thank you for sharing about your dad. Your description of his strength and faith are a lovely homage to him and a lovely reflection of the talented daughter he raised. H🌷❤️
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Re. Ablaze
20th Aug 2019 00:00am
“A grin of Reaper’s maw almost like hate,
The figure of my death begins to raise.”
The final stanza hit me the hardest.
Beautifully done.
Yours,
LostGirl
The figure of my death begins to raise.”
The final stanza hit me the hardest.
Beautifully done.
Yours,
LostGirl
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Re: Re. Ablaze
20th Aug 2019 00:31am
Thank you so much, LostGirl, for your appreciation, the embrace of your words, and the honor of place on your List.
Jade🙏🏻
Jade🙏🏻
Re. Ablaze
20th Aug 2019 4:32am
What a great quatern Ms. Jade. I especially like the last stanza with the "grin" used instead of the usual "grim" Reaper.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. Ablaze
20th Aug 2019 4:44am
Thank you so much, Wally, for your kind & supportive words - most glad for your appreciation, especially the grin/ grim twist.
Jade🙏🏻
Jade🙏🏻
Re. Ablaze
Re: Re. Ablaze
20th Aug 2019 9:03am
Thank you, dear Kathy. I can hear the conflict as I read your words. Between, we’re each of us trying to resolve the same thing in two different ways, feeling the other’s struggle. You are a Believer.
Re: Re. Ablaze
20th Aug 2019 3:18pm
Thank you Jade yes I am. And you surely must be, with so many spiritual writings I have read of yours.
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28th Aug 2019 5:54am