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About last night.
He drinks at the bar
every single day
A thin, Indian man
who looks my way
His hair is a messy pepper grey
I’m very sure
he hopes I’ll ask him to pay
I take a sip of my wine
he says, “Girl, you look fine.”
The hours pass
we share a few laughs
I sit in his grasp
where he wants me to stay
every single day
A thin, Indian man
who looks my way
His hair is a messy pepper grey
I’m very sure
he hopes I’ll ask him to pay
I take a sip of my wine
he says, “Girl, you look fine.”
The hours pass
we share a few laughs
I sit in his grasp
where he wants me to stay
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
15th Aug 2019 2:09am
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15th Aug 2019 8:35pm
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15th Aug 2019 8:37pm
Thank you lovely lady.
I’m happy to be back. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
P.S. Sending 💕 your way
I’m happy to be back. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
P.S. Sending 💕 your way
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16th Aug 2019 00:29am
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
17th Aug 2019 7:51pm
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17th Aug 2019 10:46pm
Patience is a virtue, darling.
And I could definitely get into the bourbon. (;
Thanks for all of your efforts.
Yours,
LostGirl
And I could definitely get into the bourbon. (;
Thanks for all of your efforts.
Yours,
LostGirl
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
18th Aug 2019 4:41am
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20th Aug 2019 3:46am
And if you are going to continue to stalk me here on DUP -
at the very least intend to see me naked in the end.
P.S. I dig you.
Yours,
LostGirl
at the very least intend to see me naked in the end.
P.S. I dig you.
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. About last night.
18th Aug 2019 11:26pm
The syllabic harmony, playful, counterpoints the depths of interactions hinted at. Our social norms, our expectations, laboring through prior experience, the cynicism it engenders. Again your close is quite interesting, it makes me think of the whole male/female dynamic, and the psychological nuances of possession and domination, that must be so tiring, to those continually subjected. Enjoyed mulling this over.
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19th Aug 2019 9:17am
Note to self:
*I must be sober(er) reading your commentary.”
Very insightful.
Thank you, Daniel.
Always a pleasure to read your thoughts. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
*I must be sober(er) reading your commentary.”
Very insightful.
Thank you, Daniel.
Always a pleasure to read your thoughts. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
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25th Aug 2019 8:53pm
There was a lot of "interesting" that night. (;
Thanks for stopping by Mr. Irv.
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks for stopping by Mr. Irv.
Yours,
LostGirl
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
23rd Sep 2019 8:31pm
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23rd Sep 2019 9:07pm