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MINDLESS LOVE
"Love me,love me not"
nod to this everyday song,
which we sing, sang until we sung
its rhythm changes in motion of emotions
like...
To day you here to share
and tomorrow you there with missing care
it's quite confusing, to be fair
but we learn not to care
we slide with the flow till we flew
mindless love that's all we give
nod to this everyday song,
which we sing, sang until we sung
its rhythm changes in motion of emotions
like...
To day you here to share
and tomorrow you there with missing care
it's quite confusing, to be fair
but we learn not to care
we slide with the flow till we flew
mindless love that's all we give
Published 14th Aug 2019
Author's Note
when i say mindless love i refer to the love that heals and also breaks the hearts ,the way it works means nothing to us because whether it breaks or heals us we still have it in us.
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15th Aug 2019 1:52pm
I understand the essence of your message. What we experience forever becomes a part of us.
May I ask, is English your first language?
May I ask, is English your first language?
15th Aug 2019 2:06pm
15th Aug 2019 2:09pm
Well, no; user names can be tricky. Mine is Hebrew, but English is my first language. I asked because of your request for honest critique - I like to know for sure what a writer's first language is prior to offering such.
15th Aug 2019 2:29pm
15th Aug 2019 2:36pm
I just googled it to be certain it was what I thought - yep, African. I had originally guessed Congolese. Welcome to the Deep Side.
15th Aug 2019 2:44pm
9th Apr 2020 11:29pm
Imbongi,
Ungixolele ngokuhleba
Ngithikamezwa inkulumo yakho nomunye walaba ababeka imibono ngenhla lapho ekubuza khona ngolimi lwakho
Uma usumchazela ukuthi IsiXhosa usethi uma ezophawula ngenkondlo yena uqale afise ukwazi ulimi lalowo muntu
Mina ngiwezwe lawo mazwi ezwakala sengathi anokubandlulula okukhona
Lokhu ngikusho ngoba uma umuntu esekwazi ukuthi ungowase-Afrika kungenzeka abese ekubukela phansi
Izinkondlo zakho angazihlaziyi ngendlela abezozichaza ngayo singekho isithombe sokuthi uqhamukaphi
Indlela ophendulwe akuphendule ngayo ngesikhathi usumtshelile ukuthi ukhuluma limi luni inogcobho phakathi
I would like to say that you seem to have taken a black and white view of love
It is true that love heals and it also breaks the heart
However I can not agree with you as your title is misleading in its negative view of love
The spiritual view of love which I believe in is God's love
In this context God is Love and Love is God
Now if we all live under the guidance of loving each other by caring for each other compassionately
We automatically live in God's principle of love whether we like it or not
When we do what is right with love from our hearts it no longer matters who we are and what we believe in
Whether you are an atheist or a religious person if both people care for one another as human beings
Race no longer matters when we as humankind are living in the humane spirit of ubuntu
Peace and Love,
Aside:
[It was announced today by the president that The Lockdown has been extended to 30 April 2020]
Ungixolele ngokuhleba
Ngithikamezwa inkulumo yakho nomunye walaba ababeka imibono ngenhla lapho ekubuza khona ngolimi lwakho
Uma usumchazela ukuthi IsiXhosa usethi uma ezophawula ngenkondlo yena uqale afise ukwazi ulimi lalowo muntu
Mina ngiwezwe lawo mazwi ezwakala sengathi anokubandlulula okukhona
Lokhu ngikusho ngoba uma umuntu esekwazi ukuthi ungowase-Afrika kungenzeka abese ekubukela phansi
Izinkondlo zakho angazihlaziyi ngendlela abezozichaza ngayo singekho isithombe sokuthi uqhamukaphi
Indlela ophendulwe akuphendule ngayo ngesikhathi usumtshelile ukuthi ukhuluma limi luni inogcobho phakathi
I would like to say that you seem to have taken a black and white view of love
It is true that love heals and it also breaks the heart
However I can not agree with you as your title is misleading in its negative view of love
The spiritual view of love which I believe in is God's love
In this context God is Love and Love is God
Now if we all live under the guidance of loving each other by caring for each other compassionately
We automatically live in God's principle of love whether we like it or not
When we do what is right with love from our hearts it no longer matters who we are and what we believe in
Whether you are an atheist or a religious person if both people care for one another as human beings
Race no longer matters when we as humankind are living in the humane spirit of ubuntu
Peace and Love,
Aside:
[It was announced today by the president that The Lockdown has been extended to 30 April 2020]
