Mole 6.

Dear J-P,

Here they come the castaway dreams descending into forgotn mind. That’s gorgeous.  I love love love how you can mix and match the words creating your own poem within the poem.

You’ve outdone yourself. Until I say the same thing for Mole 7.
Fabulous write x6. H🌷

Aaw thank you, dear H, I’m fascinated as the sapling tree that has been bearing slightly under ripened fruit has the reader willing, able & already /knows/ that there’s more than meets the eye to be had!

J😇P

Echo Honoria

Awesomes

Why thank you, brother poet, and it’s nice to see you here.

Brilliant on casta(way) above, rotn, forgotn!  Very impressive, Jade!  Keep at it! Publish asap and copyright the form if possible!

Gosh, thank you, Sage, for the support you’ve been expressing on these. I can’t help but feel waves of overwhelming-ness ( its been a 4- across L-O-N-G day ).  The only time I’m not so much so is when I’m writing more of these.  Meantime, I’ll be prepping for my write for Mr e.e. before too long.

Improving w/ each mole Jade. Love it.



hugs
buddhakitty.

Oh kitty, this is so dear, and way too kind of you... and I thank you.

Tiger hugs
Jade

This is way too clever. Impressed. Much. As kid remember walking through field and this thing just popped up out of ground. As an alien emerging from centre of earth!

This is way too clever. Impressed. Much. As kid remember walking through field and this thing just popped up out of ground. As an alien emerging from centre of earth!

Thank you, Rob, it’s been a while. I appreciate you dropping by. I’m about to publish Mole 7.

These are so interesting, I cock my head as I try different word combinations.

Thank you, Daniel, and yes, that’s what happens with each Mole I write.  Even the prototype Mole ( the first ) has at least 3, and its the shortest. This was a feature I had never planned on, on purpose.

Good one, like Daniel said, you kind of tilt your head sideways. Professor Jade might need to have a course in reading these.
Keep 'em coming.

*soft chuckle*

Hi Wally, and thank you. The Prof abstains from doing that as that would take away the fun from the hunt.  It’s all there, the permutations.  But even if a reader finds one, it’s usually enough to get the poem’s message.  Aah, but why settle for just the one?

🤗

Stumbled onto this when hitting the random poem button. Reads like a beautiful fragmented dream. The combinations forming and reforming single moments. Just wonderful and very clever