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Fire and Ash
he was beautiful
watching him from afar
i knew
we were destined
we met on a dance floor
my hand on his chest
moving slowly
our eyes
pulling us in
he smelled of smoke
and fire
cherry apple
i could not breathe
enough of him in
so gently we fed the heat
letting him find his fire
within me
and it was beautiful
over time,
i couldn't fan
what was no longer there
his fire burned hotter
died quicker
not because he didn't
love me
he was afraid of how much
i loved him
unsure if
he was worthy
watching him from afar
i knew
we were destined
we met on a dance floor
my hand on his chest
moving slowly
our eyes
pulling us in
he smelled of smoke
and fire
cherry apple
i could not breathe
enough of him in
so gently we fed the heat
letting him find his fire
within me
and it was beautiful
over time,
i couldn't fan
what was no longer there
his fire burned hotter
died quicker
not because he didn't
love me
he was afraid of how much
i loved him
unsure if
he was worthy
Published 11th Aug 2019
Author's Note
Out of all my past relationships, he is the only one I still reminisce about
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11th Aug 2019 10:23pm
12th Aug 2019 11:35pm
11th Aug 2019 10:39pm
No telling how many beautiful relationships were truncated because one felt they weren't worthy enough; or, were afraid of hurting the other.
Like Josh, I get this, JeJe.
Like Josh, I get this, JeJe.
12th Aug 2019 11:37pm
Thank you so much Ahavati for your thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated .. so true .. I'm sure many relationships are truncated for this reason ... sadly
All to well, I get this. I've been the sure one as well as the seemingly unworthy vascilator lamenting the one I let get away. I am one who has faith that lightening does strike twice. The way you describe him and you with him is enthralling. Buenisima!
12th Aug 2019 11:38pm
Anonymous
13th Aug 2019 1:36pm
Felt this one...
So sorry for my late response ... thank you so much for your thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated x
18th Aug 2019 11:22pm
Yes...I can certainly relate to this J...sometimes the one is not the one...for many unknown reasons. Great ink.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
23rd Dec 2019 9:35pm
So sorry for my late response Harry ... thank you for your thoughtful comments ... always appreciated
Cheers to you
JeJe
Cheers to you
JeJe
