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tears of the forgotten
I wept...you drank my tears
my sorrow made you drunk
you raped what was left of my feelings
then left me holding them in my hands
so little and so small
they weren't big enough to hold me up
to walk out the door
Published 11th Aug 2019
Author's Note
emotional abuse can be just as bad this is a past relationship it took me a long time to walk out ❤
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2019 6:49pm
I do hope, my Queen,
that you found just a bit
of comfort in this write;
I can only hope
that you are in a
much better
place now ...
love to you, your ally in Darkness, ~Devlin
11th Aug 2019 7:34pm
thank you beautiful one this was a time back this just came to me today I'm unsure why...I'm content now lovely lady...
love you...
love Brenda ❤
love you...
love Brenda ❤
11th Aug 2019 7:39pm
Such a heavy write...
I guess there are people despite what they do to us we never really ever learn to move from them
I guess there are people despite what they do to us we never really ever learn to move from them
12th Aug 2019 1:05am
12th Aug 2019 1:01am
When our heart is pressed down by the gravity of pain...a poem helps to set it free...poignant words Brenda.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
12th Aug 2019 1:06am
thank you dearest Harry for understanding yes I believe that's true I find as a writer I can best express my feelings in a poem releasing me from them... beautiful insight Harry...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Anonymous
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12th Aug 2019 10:43pm
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13th Aug 2019 00:47am
thank you dearest Ethan for feeling this write so deeply...I appreciate you more than I can say...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
13th Aug 2019 6:47am
the neglect the abuse ..you are such an intense narrator of psychological trauma..the loss. .the way you say it all seems simplistic yet comes in as unbearably overwhelming heaviness..that's impossibly versed in your intense quill's flexing possiblities! light & love ev Crim..
15th Aug 2019 10:32pm
thank you beautiful Uma most graciously for feeling this poem so deeply...I'm greatly touched by your comment...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Anonymous
14th Aug 2019 5:03am
Hey Crim......this broke me.......I’m so proud of you.......you’ve become a stronger soul than you’ve ever thought yourself to be.......don’t ever underestimate the power that is within you......outstanding ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
15th Aug 2019 10:33pm
aw beautiful Flower thank you for the love you've shown me it's deeply felt...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
