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stuff a tampon up your ass to stop the leak
I come to inflict real some damage
I hate what I've become so much I vomit
the haters club is in full attendance
with self-righteous pious poetry
look at me in all my glory
ooh and ah
I would rather a neon light
shine the truth of a whore's cunt
to your approval
yes there is truth in a whore's cunt
it doesn't lie to you and tell you are God
no, it requires another hundred if you take too long
working a pussy like your broke
your soul's out of money
now prick get off
I'm done crying for you
it's not me but you knew that didn't you
I appreciate a good blade
it cuts through the lies
you've gotten to the heart of me
but no one else could
you know who you are
the rest can just die
with their fluffy bunny rabbit words
that make me want to retch
I don't give a fuck anymore
this game is lame to me
listen to the clucking hens
bullied into a corner
don't speak for yourself
cower
I will bring the underground
back to the depths
where Lucifer masturbates
I'm sorry did I make you cum?
I piss on you nicey nice thoughts
and just like that I'm out of here
back into my Mad Hatter world
where I tell you to step off
fuck what others think be you
learn from the Queen of nothing
when all the flies scatter
you'll learn what really matters
Published 11th Aug 2019
Author's Note
I'm not crying anymore my Queen ❤
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11th Aug 2019 11:39pm
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12th Aug 2019 00:29am
yes Indeed dearest Tim sometimes it's alright to be angry... thank you for the read ❤
12th Aug 2019 00:31am
Fuckin brilliant just fuckin brilliant. Speaks my language this one does, now craving more.
12th Aug 2019 00:33am
thank you graciously dearest Stan I'll see what I can do... I deeply appreciate the love here ❤
12th Aug 2019 00:59am
Now that's taking a hatchet to the fluffy brained herd! Fuckin' awesome ink Brenda.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
12th Aug 2019 1:04am
giggles thank you graciously dearest Harry for the love on this write...you're deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
12th Aug 2019 1:55am
....the title alone made me pull my phone closer. 😂 I didnt want to miss a word. Not sure what impregnated your mind and heart to birth this, but damn!... your pen was laced with disdain and rawness. #penlove
12th Aug 2019 4:36am
thank you graciously beautiful Rain giggles it really was inspired by one of our beautiful Devlin's writes it probably wasn't intended for me but I took it as a kick in the ass and stop sniveling and just be myself... plus a strong dislike of other things I won't name...I deeply appreciate your love on this write...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
12th Aug 2019 2:09am
Dear B,
Brava! Agree with RCT, you could have stopped at the title! Just fantastic! I kind of want to use this now everytime I hear someone belly aching.
All time favorite stanza:
“yes there is truth in a whore's cunt
it doesn't lie to you and tell you are God
no, it requires another hundred if you take too long”
So much stroking (and not the sex kind) needed to consistently placate. Excellent write!! H🌷
Brava! Agree with RCT, you could have stopped at the title! Just fantastic! I kind of want to use this now everytime I hear someone belly aching.
All time favorite stanza:
“yes there is truth in a whore's cunt
it doesn't lie to you and tell you are God
no, it requires another hundred if you take too long”
So much stroking (and not the sex kind) needed to consistently placate. Excellent write!! H🌷
12th Aug 2019 4:38am
thank you beautiful Honoria you made me laugh with your comment... that's exactly what I need to do stop whining about being different and just be me... I can't be anyone else anyway...I'm happy those lines gave you a smile...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
12th Aug 2019 5:14pm
Damn girl you full of rage.
your like Hannibal lecture let out of his cage.
your words have people running and building a bomb shelter.
girl wats the brand of your tampons im betting its called Helter Skelter.
Fuck having a plumber if i ever get a leak im getting you on speed dial girl hahahaha. xx
your like Hannibal lecture let out of his cage.
your words have people running and building a bomb shelter.
girl wats the brand of your tampons im betting its called Helter Skelter.
Fuck having a plumber if i ever get a leak im getting you on speed dial girl hahahaha. xx
12th Aug 2019 5:44pm
lmao dearest Jack I love your mad rap comment it's so fitting yeah I'm known to go off every now and then...thank you for the love on this write you're deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
12th Aug 2019 6:01pm
Ha! Furiously sexy.....primo.
Crim
Crim
12th Aug 2019 6:17pm
12th Aug 2019 6:59pm
Tough love is called that not because of its being tough on someone else, but it is damn hard to call bullshit and install a boundary that has some teeth in it so you can ever feel reasonably safe.
Tough love is tough to do. It's tough on those who are doing the loving.
Many choice avenues to mine this gem.
Tough love is tough to do. It's tough on those who are doing the loving.
Many choice avenues to mine this gem.
thank you graciously RT I'm happy this write spoke to you... really it was tough love on myself in a way...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
13th Aug 2019 3:24am
Hey Crim.....way to let the ink drool with anger.......this outstanding and straight forward words have left me speechless......one of your best.....luv it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
14th Aug 2019 7:04am
thank you beautiful Flower you got to let it out sometimes... I'm so happy you liked this...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
14th Aug 2019 6:31am
Bren. Bren. Bren. - shaking my head -
There`s no crying in poetry;
we`re meant to kick`ass in it!
And you`ve done a brilliant job,
my Queen; I`m glad I inspire.
Love you❤ ... ~Devlin
14th Aug 2019 7:07am
hello my beautiful dark Queen giggles at no crying in poetry hell yeah you're right...you always inspire me thank you lovely one...
I love you...
Brenda ❤
I love you...
Brenda ❤
17th Aug 2019 4:27am
Anger... Seductively smart in the creative writing you have a talent for 🖤
18th Aug 2019 8:32pm
thank you graciously beautiful Jade for the love on this darkened write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
