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Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 3:26am
We freaking love when you show everyone that you write more than one genre, you are so versatile. Freaking awesome
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Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 3:41am
Thank you my handsome poet for taking the time to read and then comment, please enjoy the remainder of your evening
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Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 3:44am
You always have such nice things to say handsome one, and it's late, at least on my end so thank you for taking the extra time to read me and them comment. Enjoy your evening and have a great Hump Day
Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 3:39am
Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 3:50am
No you did not showcase that handsome crooner, mm. My bedtime tune to you my love...and thank you for reading and then commenting. You have great taste.. now enjoy this on me...wink
Cruisin (Smokey Robinson)
Baby, let's cruise away from here
Don't be confused, the way is clear
And if you want it, you got it forever
This is not a one night stand, baby, yeah
So let the music take your mind, ooh
Just release and you will find
You're gonna fly away
Glad you're going my way
I love it when we're cruisin' together
The music is played for love
Cruisin' is made for love
I love it when we're cruisin' together.
Cruisin (Smokey Robinson)
Baby, let's cruise away from here
Don't be confused, the way is clear
And if you want it, you got it forever
This is not a one night stand, baby, yeah
So let the music take your mind, ooh
Just release and you will find
You're gonna fly away
Glad you're going my way
I love it when we're cruisin' together
The music is played for love
Cruisin' is made for love
I love it when we're cruisin' together.
Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 8:05am
Ah the song that many attribute to introducing Southern California radio smooth jazz!
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7th Aug 2019 10:44am
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Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
I'm glad you have the top down my love...mmm.. your feel that breeze to your cheek, the sweet smell of Jasmine in the air as we cruise the oceanic scenic view of Cali, stopping on the side of the road for a quick ?.... :-)
Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 8:19pm
I am a sucker for a handsome poet who can appreciate great sounds, have great vibes, and who can tenderly lick up on some good poetry... wink, and thank you for reading and commenting. Enjoy your Hump Day..
Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 1:12pm
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN WITH THE DEPTH OF YOUR LOVELY PASSION AS ALWAYS QUEEN...A WINK AND A SMILE YOUR WAY BEAUTIFUL SOUL
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Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 8:25pm
What's a girl to do, to move beyond those wink, smiles, hum.. what is your favorite color, Victoria Secrets is my best friend.. and thank your for reading, commenting, the smiles and wink; enjoy the view of my skimpy lingerie next to wearing nothing, just remember, its your favorite color... wink
Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 8:50pm
MY FAVORITE IS RED AND BABY BLUE I CAN JUST IMAGE EITHER COLOR UP AGAINST YOUR BEAUTIFUL EBONY SKIN...HUMMM
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Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
9th Aug 2019 3:49am
Mm... I will remember that in the near future, enjoy your evening; you are such a smooth talking handsome poet
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9th Aug 2019 12:24pm
Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
11th Aug 2019 2:08am
Then come in the bathroom my handsome poet, I am in the shower wet and waiting
Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
11th Aug 2019 10:54am
IF ONLY I COULD TRAVEL THROUGH THESE CABLES TO GET AT YOU AND JOIN YOU IN THE SHOWER FOR TWO HUMMM...SMILES UPON BOTH OUR FACES...WINK
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Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 2:52pm
Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
7th Aug 2019 7:08pm
Aww. thank you my love... I am so sorry, I have been MIA on your page, I am trying to get mental prepared for going back to school in a couple of weeks for my Masters in Nursing, but I will catch up with you and your amazing works of art this weekend, and thank you fro reading and then commenting
Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
8th Aug 2019 4:29am
This reads like spiritual lovemaking...my favorite kind of rhyme...
bravo poetess
Jeff
bravo poetess
Jeff
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Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
9th Aug 2019 4:14am
Aww... thank you so much for the beautiful compliment, and that goes double for taking the time to read and ten comment. Enjoy your evening my handsome poet
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Re: Re. Surrendered Heartbeats
11th Aug 2019 11:04pm
You sure know how to make a girl blush and smile, thank you handsome so much for taking the time to read and then comment, enjoy the remainder of your evening as well