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Relapsed
You stared
and
I glared
Leaning forward I accept your embrace
Dragging my fingers gently across your face
You looked
then
I was hooked
Hoping, I'm not waiting in vain
Wishing, that this wasn't driving me insane
You beamed
and
I screamed
"I'm on the longest high I've ever known!"
"Hold your breath, suppress your moans."
You whispered
then
I whimpered
Here I sit, cross-legged, in your lap
Thinking, "Shit! I've again relapsed"
and
I glared
Leaning forward I accept your embrace
Dragging my fingers gently across your face
You looked
then
I was hooked
Hoping, I'm not waiting in vain
Wishing, that this wasn't driving me insane
You beamed
and
I screamed
"I'm on the longest high I've ever known!"
"Hold your breath, suppress your moans."
You whispered
then
I whimpered
Here I sit, cross-legged, in your lap
Thinking, "Shit! I've again relapsed"
Published 15th Dec 2011
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15th Dec 2011 4:24am
You wrote
and
I quote
"I'm on the longest high I've never known!" :)
Leave it to you to write a perfect poem and define with emphasis. I love reading your work.
and
I quote
"I'm on the longest high I've never known!" :)
Leave it to you to write a perfect poem and define with emphasis. I love reading your work.
15th Dec 2011 4:39pm
-.- i read your comment and i saw an error *slaps hand to head*; never is spp to be *ever.
I l o v e that you love my work *throws confetti* hahah LOL
I l o v e that you love my work *throws confetti* hahah LOL
Anonymous
15th Dec 2011 12:47pm
I read the title, not the cat, I expected a drug poem, I read it and got to your crafted art...
"Here I sit, cross-legged, in your lap
Thinking, "Shit! I've again relapsed"
And I realised Im blonde [giggle].
This is a unique, wonderful poem, and it sculptures that feeling so well and you tied it up perfectly in one word "relapsed"
Lovely stuff.
I . L O V E . I T .
Al-x-
"Here I sit, cross-legged, in your lap
Thinking, "Shit! I've again relapsed"
And I realised Im blonde [giggle].
This is a unique, wonderful poem, and it sculptures that feeling so well and you tied it up perfectly in one word "relapsed"
Lovely stuff.
I . L O V E . I T .
Al-x-
Alip :)
Its kinda funny that you said your blonde haha ppl tell me im blonde ALL the time too.
I contemplated on the title for a while but somx its best js to use one word than a long drawn out one.
@sculpture -Im glad you loved it <3!!
[RubixCube]
Its kinda funny that you said your blonde haha ppl tell me im blonde ALL the time too.
I contemplated on the title for a while but somx its best js to use one word than a long drawn out one.
@sculpture -Im glad you loved it <3!!
[RubixCube]
