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Disappear
I used to think that the worst thing you could do was to completely disappear. But now I know there's something worse...nobody noticing that you've disappeared.
My life's cycle...
I beg for solitude
once I get it I cry out in loneliness
growing up, learning from banging my head against the wall, I learned to slow down, take a deep breath and just enjoy the ride
My life's cycle...
I beg for solitude
once I get it I cry out in loneliness
growing up, learning from banging my head against the wall, I learned to slow down, take a deep breath and just enjoy the ride
Published 6th Aug 2019
Author's Note
This is just a raw observation of how it feels when you sink into depression.
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
6th Aug 2019 6:45pm
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You know it is! That's why you live between the lines. And you do it all in balls out!
-Minx❣
-Minx❣
"Enjoying the ride is so easier said than done, no?"
Depends on who your riding! 😎
Depends on who your riding! 😎
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
6th Aug 2019 6:56pm
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2019 10:25pm
So much truth
6th Aug 2019 10:37pm
Anonymous
9th Aug 2019 2:30pm
Life is a 🌪!!! Lol
Agreed. Indifference is the worst feeling, in reference to the 1st stanza.
12th Aug 2019 1:38am
Ah the guardians of truth...paradox and confusion...or perhaps as Jean-Paul Sartre said...hell is other people lol. great thinking ink Minxie.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
12th Aug 2019 7:41am
3rd Sep 2019 4:53am
this is so familiar by being relatable and touching...
am, myself.. battling.. as we speak.
am, myself.. battling.. as we speak.
12th Sep 2019 11:55pm
You seem to encapsulate the feeling perfectly here, Minx. What do they say? Be careful what you pray for, you just might get it. I prayed for solitude 20 years ago, and I have grown to love it.
To be honest, the centered option for long-lined poetry makes it very difficult to read.
To be honest, the centered option for long-lined poetry makes it very difficult to read.
13th Sep 2019 3:22pm
Anonymous
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21st Sep 2019 00:24am
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