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Dreams don't do her justice
nor an afternoon delight
it's those eyes that make her sparkle
when I'll be holding her tonight
the wisp upon her shoulder
and the feel of silky sheets
a craved ingrained emotion
of two souls that were meant to meet
a deepness to be conquered
as I hold her breast to breast
traversing two glistened bodies
in the morning life shall rest
it's more than a kiss of morning sunshine
or a soothing of the ear
it's written amongst the spirits
drowning out all fear
nor an afternoon delight
it's those eyes that make her sparkle
when I'll be holding her tonight
the wisp upon her shoulder
and the feel of silky sheets
a craved ingrained emotion
of two souls that were meant to meet
a deepness to be conquered
as I hold her breast to breast
traversing two glistened bodies
in the morning life shall rest
it's more than a kiss of morning sunshine
or a soothing of the ear
it's written amongst the spirits
drowning out all fear
Published 6th Aug 2019
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2019 3:12pm
Good heavens, Tim, this leaves one breathing out a long sigh. Like bottling the warmth of sunshine without the over-bright. :-)
6th Aug 2019 4:25pm
dearest Tim this is such a beautifully passionate write
and having a lot of love for the lady this is about
makes me ecstatic to read please tell her I miss her for me ❤
love Brenda 💕
and having a lot of love for the lady this is about
makes me ecstatic to read please tell her I miss her for me ❤
love Brenda 💕
6th Aug 2019 5:19pm
6th Aug 2019 5:56pm
Drowning out all fear; there you go - as fear is the opposite of Love.
Excellent write, Tim.
Excellent write, Tim.
You seriously need to be published on paper Tim! The title something like..
"A Book of Romantic Poetry From a Man's Perspective!"
or
"The Dummies Guide to Writing Love Notes to Women"
Subtitled
"Guaranteed to make any woman swoon! "
Seriously I'd buy your book. Although I think it would be a bestseller with men looking to make their woman swoon!!
Beautiful ink!
-Minxy❣
"A Book of Romantic Poetry From a Man's Perspective!"
or
"The Dummies Guide to Writing Love Notes to Women"
Subtitled
"Guaranteed to make any woman swoon! "
Seriously I'd buy your book. Although I think it would be a bestseller with men looking to make their woman swoon!!
Beautiful ink!
-Minxy❣
