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EYE   -   SORE   (with apology to EAPoe )

 

Impending   doom  /  zoom
                                       zoom /
         words'n'letters
crackle                      cacklin      g,
                fall to
            whatever's         b-low  ,     yknow? (
win
place
                     [or]
show
             boom zoom        for whatfor?
a-lone in a roomroomroom,        ~       knowbody but eye,
                                                                    like wee little me,
ta-foom  ta-foom  (roll'em over
                                     for mr jellyman)        a
                                                                      score
                                                                      f-shore,
                    aye       think
              ye         wants        too much more
                                              too much more more more more,
                         just take from the Moor,
                who will give it
                                         to thee whore

/////////"quoth the raven,
                                 never-more" ///////////////

always end your poom wit a poetic cliche whenever it is possible


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Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX (DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
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