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Love view
Kindling daylight amidst a scorching night
Passionate kiss while possessing my dear
Grant verse the rhyme thru beloved sight
We embrace forever to let time disappear.
Written by
runaway-mindtrain
Published 4th Aug 2019
| Edited 2nd Sep 2019
Author's Note
Then speak to the heart so no one can hear...
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Love view
4th Aug 2019 2:34am
dearest Jeff this is so beautiful
lighting up the night as it goes...
love Brenda 💕
lighting up the night as it goes...
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
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4th Aug 2019 8:44am
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4th Aug 2019 2:58pm
Re. Love view
5th Aug 2019 00:49am
If Shakespeare was still alive he'd steal this from you Jeff...amazing!
Peace Harry
Peace Harry
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5th Aug 2019 4:04am
Dude, that is way too much of a compliment...I write nothing in comparison to the Bard...thank you extremely much for thinking so...I truly appreciate the read...
Jeff
Jeff
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6th Aug 2019 1:46pm
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Re. Love view
12th Aug 2019 9:05am
An incredible, private vision you have painted, Jeff.
Hat's off my dear poet*~*
Hat's off my dear poet*~*
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12th Aug 2019 2:20pm
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Sep 2019 10:45pm
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