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it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
it may not always be so; these stone
walls lining castle ruins, where these
fortresses of our heart seem invincible-
in love, their towering turrets a standard’s
base upon these dusty ramparts-
witnessing architecture wed landscape-
supporting our unyielding faith.
it may not always be so; victors
come and go; wars fought and lost-
as much as they are won; should
another champion capture your heart
as I myself have done, your attention
a profession of new-found love-
then, shall it be for you, cathedral’d
gowns and proclamations of vows-
But, for me, a letting go; and, such
funerary sounds hastening escape
to distant lands; broken heart intact.
~
#ee cummings
walls lining castle ruins, where these
fortresses of our heart seem invincible-
in love, their towering turrets a standard’s
base upon these dusty ramparts-
witnessing architecture wed landscape-
supporting our unyielding faith.
it may not always be so; victors
come and go; wars fought and lost-
as much as they are won; should
another champion capture your heart
as I myself have done, your attention
a profession of new-found love-
then, shall it be for you, cathedral’d
gowns and proclamations of vows-
But, for me, a letting go; and, such
funerary sounds hastening escape
to distant lands; broken heart intact.
~
#ee cummings
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 2nd Aug 2019
Author's Note
Non-entry for the 'What a Puddle-Wonderful World' ee cummings' Classic Corner tribute: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10912/
Inspirational poem: it may not always be so; and i say: https://hellopoetry.com/poem/1609/it-may-not-always-be-so-and-i-say/
Inspirational poem: it may not always be so; and i say: https://hellopoetry.com/poem/1609/it-may-not-always-be-so-and-i-say/
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Re. it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2019 5:52pm
OMG this is sooooooo sad. 😕
Incredibly well written and effortlessly evoking a medieval landscape!
📝❤
Incredibly well written and effortlessly evoking a medieval landscape!
📝❤
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Re: Re. it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
Thank you. 📝❤
The inspirational poem has always been a favorite of mine. It's a beautiful letting go to allow another to live their life as they choose. Very few people know how to do that.
The inspirational poem has always been a favorite of mine. It's a beautiful letting go to allow another to live their life as they choose. Very few people know how to do that.
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Re: Re. it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
2nd Aug 2019 7:45pm
Thank you, BB, and for the RL honor as well.
Cummings has always been one of my favorite poets. I loved how he rewrote formatting, punctuation, and grammar in the name of poetry. Or, rather, allowed poetry to define him.
I do hope you will brave this comp. I feel you would do well.
Cummings has always been one of my favorite poets. I loved how he rewrote formatting, punctuation, and grammar in the name of poetry. Or, rather, allowed poetry to define him.
I do hope you will brave this comp. I feel you would do well.
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Re: Re. it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
3rd Aug 2019 10:57am
Don't view them as a comp, BB. View them as a challenge to expand your writing abilities. You never know what self-discovery it will push you toward. . .
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2nd Aug 2019 11:45pm
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3rd Aug 2019 10:58am
Re. it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
3rd Aug 2019 2:31am
This is really pretty, lilting, delicate. I read a couple of Cummings poems and started working on something, his style is so different but I like it, there's a certain surrender there in his poems that you captured and it makes them pleasant to read along with a certain somber whimsy, I guess.. I just read the poem you linked to and it's a really nice one too, I understand it more now because of your poem :)
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3rd Aug 2019 11:01am
Thank you, PR. I appreciate that greatly. He's a tough bird to emulate in that most simply focus on the form vs. that surrender you mentioned.
Thrilled that you are going to brave him. He was such a pioneer of vocabulary, form, and punctuation. Even eschewed capitalization for the most part. My inspiration is one of the few that actually contained a capitalized word. I may actually try one more on this one - as I have so many favorites of his. I have several of his books, but many of the poems cannot be found online.
Thrilled that you are going to brave him. He was such a pioneer of vocabulary, form, and punctuation. Even eschewed capitalization for the most part. My inspiration is one of the few that actually contained a capitalized word. I may actually try one more on this one - as I have so many favorites of his. I have several of his books, but many of the poems cannot be found online.
Re: Re. it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
4th Aug 2019 4:17am
I just clicked on his name on the poem page you linked to and a whole long list of his poems popped up, not sure if any of them are the ones in your book..
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3rd Aug 2019 4:21pm
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3rd Aug 2019 4:58pm
Re. it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
4th Aug 2019 00:31am
This is so beautiful Ahavati .. ee cummings is a favorite ... you have so eloquently captured his essence as only you can do ... ♡
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4th Aug 2019 00:52am
Thank you, JeJe. Honored. xo
I do hope you will enter the challenge since he is a favorite of yours.
I do hope you will enter the challenge since he is a favorite of yours.
Re. it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
4th Aug 2019 10:19pm
Seems extremely polished. Very powerful command of language, I think it's fine as it is.
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Re. it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
5th Aug 2019 00:33am
Mr Cummings has always been a favorite of mine...his style was always multi-textual...beautiful tribute A.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
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Re. it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
5th Aug 2019 2:16pm
Dear A, this is beautiful, this is as if a cello in silence. I love it, not a single element a foot wrong. Best of best. This is serious treasure. Thank you.
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Re. it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
10th Aug 2019 3:25pm
Much as I liked this poem, and particularly the closing words ... "hastening escape
to distant lands", I was more drawn by your response to a comment: "It's a beautiful letting go to allow another to live their life as they choose.", and, for a variety of reasons, feel quite moved.
to distant lands", I was more drawn by your response to a comment: "It's a beautiful letting go to allow another to live their life as they choose.", and, for a variety of reasons, feel quite moved.
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10th Aug 2019 3:41pm