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Wasted breath
So tell me what the fuck I'm supposed to do
Livid if I'm silent, pissed if I speak too
The words fall and shatter on the ground
Unnoticed, they make no sounds
I'm so fucking lost and what's the fucking use
I could do it all and it will never be enough for you
Or anyone for that matter
I wanna paint this place in my blood splatter
Livid if I'm silent, pissed if I speak too
The words fall and shatter on the ground
Unnoticed, they make no sounds
I'm so fucking lost and what's the fucking use
I could do it all and it will never be enough for you
Or anyone for that matter
I wanna paint this place in my blood splatter
Published 1st Aug 2019
Author's Note
Still working on this...written quickly in pure rage......
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31st Aug 2019 1:19am
Nice man. Damned if you do, damned if you don’t. I read your authors note, so I get the intensity. I think it could be more effective with fewer expletives, actually. Cool piece though.
