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1st Aug 2019 2:35am
I am a great fan of brevity... especially when it brings content...as you do.
I did find the second stanza just a mite confusing... *ave each breath*... is that written as you intended? Thanks for the good read... Ely
I did find the second stanza just a mite confusing... *ave each breath*... is that written as you intended? Thanks for the good read... Ely
1st Aug 2019 3:48pm
It is. I adore the word ave. Ave expresses good wishes whether meeting or parting ways. Our feelings when they escape us like each breath has perception of others escape the definition of intended expression.
1st Aug 2019 6:56pm
