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Wish I knew just what to say
A million fucking words blasting holes in my brain...
Each time I try it doesn't seem to fit
I fuck up everything so of course this sounds like shit
For so long my words have blown away with the wind..

But this time they need to sting
I want you to hurt, feel just a inch of my pain
Maybe then you would have realized what drove me to the edge...

The format is all wrong
The flow is off cue
But fuck it cause it won't matter
You'll forget this too...
Written by darlingxxdesolate (Desolate Noir)
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Author's Note
Disgusted with this piece but trying to work on it..
Thanks for reading.
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