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Lewd
He did throw the sperm on my back
and it wouldn’t stop coming out
it gave me a sense of fascination
and lewd
i can not explain objectively why.
and it wouldn’t stop coming out
it gave me a sense of fascination
and lewd
i can not explain objectively why.
Published 28th Jul 2019
| Edited 24th Sep 2023
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2nd Aug 2019 6:20pm
Maybe You have no objectivity
because You are part of the subjectivity?
Would love to see more themes and or author's notes to help us readers (me) with the gist of thought(s) You try to convey : )
welcome to the deep
because You are part of the subjectivity?
Would love to see more themes and or author's notes to help us readers (me) with the gist of thought(s) You try to convey : )
welcome to the deep
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29th Jan 2024 10:22pm
Hello there, I decided to go back to your first poem written here on DUP since you have some history here. Your poem is enthralling. Hot, nasty, dirty and oh so very exciting. Nicely done.
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29th Feb 2024 4:05pm
I think sometimes degradation brings a certain satisfaction, the dom/sub relationship has so many aspects. It's short quick write that delves deep into an action many of us here found titillating.
29th Feb 2024 4:44pm
To me is ants rubbing their antennas :) A degraded ant. :) It is fun and pass time and expression of love and sex also. It is a lot of things. Anytime I see ants doing that, I am remined of sex.
