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I’m Not Judging But…
so many people take the easy road
nobody wants to try anymore
it’s a one way ticket, but what have you learned?
an image filled with no substance
poetry for me is a form of hatred
love and temptation
locked up feelings released
while some giving nothing for me to breathe
lacking pain, heart, passion, Rage!!!
only ever giving out what’s expected
ONE line interventions
does it help you?
did you write it for you?
my guess is you wrote it for attention
well let’s see...
as for me
my mind is clear from foggy views
has been since I said goodbye to fake friends
now I'm spinning around the room
seeing who’s left
only a hand few
with the rest saying “I don’t care for your care”
no worries here
I gave up on ass kissers long before
only one road I’m traveling on
the road to my salvation
my humanity!
yeah it hurts some days
gets a bit lonely
had to learn to grow cold
disappointment is the way of this world
from politics, down to relationships
it’s all so selfish
ignorant till it's you at the end of the knife
not trying to say it’s not good to do things for you
but when you screw everyone else along the way
then what was it worth?
if you want to know me
well, I just want to give out love
but also learned when you give too much
it becomes diluted in insincerities
having to look inside the darkness sometimes
for one day I can bring out the healing
so please, take a seat
look into the mirror
and ask yourself
what kind of person are you?
nobody wants to try anymore
it’s a one way ticket, but what have you learned?
an image filled with no substance
poetry for me is a form of hatred
love and temptation
locked up feelings released
while some giving nothing for me to breathe
lacking pain, heart, passion, Rage!!!
only ever giving out what’s expected
ONE line interventions
does it help you?
did you write it for you?
my guess is you wrote it for attention
well let’s see...
as for me
my mind is clear from foggy views
has been since I said goodbye to fake friends
now I'm spinning around the room
seeing who’s left
only a hand few
with the rest saying “I don’t care for your care”
no worries here
I gave up on ass kissers long before
only one road I’m traveling on
the road to my salvation
my humanity!
yeah it hurts some days
gets a bit lonely
had to learn to grow cold
disappointment is the way of this world
from politics, down to relationships
it’s all so selfish
ignorant till it's you at the end of the knife
not trying to say it’s not good to do things for you
but when you screw everyone else along the way
then what was it worth?
if you want to know me
well, I just want to give out love
but also learned when you give too much
it becomes diluted in insincerities
having to look inside the darkness sometimes
for one day I can bring out the healing
so please, take a seat
look into the mirror
and ask yourself
what kind of person are you?
Published 23rd Jul 2019
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23rd Jul 2019 10:25am
Sometimes, it’s best that people go their own way when they feel they’re being taken for granted. Nothing worst than staying with someone who’s all bitter & twisted ! Aargh.
The title says it all... and the but, is very telling.
Hope you enjoy the rest of your day/ evening ! 🌹
The title says it all... and the but, is very telling.
Hope you enjoy the rest of your day/ evening ! 🌹
23rd Jul 2019 10:49am
I'm sure I'm the bitter/twisted one lol. More about my feelings about how I feel people don't show passion anymore. That and people come off a bit selfish anymore. More of my frustrations I guess.
Thanks for reading, friend 🤗
Thanks for reading, friend 🤗
26th Jul 2019 4:54am
Hmm. You’re frustrated & hurt... and that’s understood !
Let’s thrash it out to some live NIN, and see how we feel afterwards... hugs ~ 🖤💋
https://youtu.be/AvJKVKglIRs
Let’s thrash it out to some live NIN, and see how we feel afterwards... hugs ~ 🖤💋
https://youtu.be/AvJKVKglIRs
26th Jul 2019 7:08am
I wouldn't say I'm hurt. Just a common feeling about change maybe. And you know I'm always down to rock out hehe 😁
26th Jul 2019 11:15am
Well. I would’ve been hurt by that other comment, however, I’m sure it’s like water off of a ducks back.
Change, can be challenging... so let’s go ! 🐾🎧🔥🎤😎🎼😈😇
Change, can be challenging... so let’s go ! 🐾🎧🔥🎤😎🎼😈😇
26th Jul 2019 3:08pm
That stuff doesn't really bother me. I probably would be more upset if I knew what she was talking about lol. Really I haven't been on here that much to think anyone really had a problem with me.
I been listening to a lot of 80's rock lately
https://youtu.be/kXt5NWY5Ay0
😎
I been listening to a lot of 80's rock lately
https://youtu.be/kXt5NWY5Ay0
😎
27th Jul 2019 5:36pm
Oh man... you’re killing me; and that makes me wanna stick a needle in my eye, and drift off on the nod ! Sighs. 😱🔫
28th Jul 2019 8:37am
Haha well my music list is all over the place. I'm just down for anything that inspires me. Can't stand a lot of today's music though. Even the ones with decent lyrics gets drowned out by electronics.
28th Jul 2019 3:11pm
Perhaps, your mood dictates what you listen to; I know that’s how it is for me.
Hmm. I’ve an eclectic taste in music, having worked at a radio station many, many moons ago in the late 1990’s when life was a little less hectic and complicated.
Music, is like therapy for me, sometimes.
Hmm. I’ve an eclectic taste in music, having worked at a radio station many, many moons ago in the late 1990’s when life was a little less hectic and complicated.
Music, is like therapy for me, sometimes.
You do seem a bit more than judgey to me. I guess I'm one of the ones this is directed at given the circumstances, but my conscience is clean, so give me the finger. Before you speak about substance & attention, you better take a good look at the shit you've been praising.....
It all comes full circle, a friend just turned hater...hate on ✌
It all comes full circle, a friend just turned hater...hate on ✌
23rd Jul 2019 6:35pm
Huh? This is an edit of an older poem. I'm not dissing anyone. I'm still cool with you, not trying to say anything bad about you. Never had any bad feeling towards you. Sorry if I made you feel that way.
