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THE BRISTLECONE FOREST CONTINUES TO BURN INSIDE ME
At 10,000 feet
The world takes your words
Away
Pneumatic action slows
The eyes and ears
Appear to expand
It occurs to you
To drown in silence
Both heavy and light
The world takes your words
Away
Pneumatic action slows
The eyes and ears
Appear to expand
It occurs to you
To drown in silence
Both heavy and light
Published 18th Jul 2019
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18th Jul 2019 5:50pm
Your author's note should be a part of your poem, Kumar. Particularly as in the final line.
I can feel the fire of passion in this write.
I can feel the fire of passion in this write.
18th Jul 2019 5:58pm
18th Jul 2019 6:02pm
Regarding your suggestion, I'm gonna stew on it a bit. Thank you for meaningful critique!
18th Jul 2019 6:21pm
18th Jul 2019 7:32pm
22nd May 2020 4:51am
..those bristlecones..
i'm breathing in this felt sensation of an image. they truly have blessed you with a long lasting gift.
i'm breathing in this felt sensation of an image. they truly have blessed you with a long lasting gift.
22nd May 2020 4:53am
