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little poppies of pain
sadness cultivates madness
in my garden of shadows
windowpane sin so transparent it's painful
there are no easy answers
when jealousy blossoms
out of the darkness, it's wrought
when sexual endeavors
turn into something it ought not
feelings emerge where there should be none
little poppies of disdain
love and hate choke each other out
here in the badlands of desire
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Re: Re. little poppies of pain
18th Jul 2019 12:36pm
thank you graciously dearest HF for the love on this write...I am always rusty after taking a break I'm happy this one spoke to you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. little poppies of pain
18th Jul 2019 4:31pm
Re: Re. little poppies of pain
18th Jul 2019 4:35pm
I realize it I'm just easily manipulated in my weakened state I'm extremely bipolar with delusions at times...thank you for your thoughts...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. little poppies of pain
18th Jul 2019 4:55pm
WE ALL HAVE FALLEN IN THAT TRAP WHEN IT CONCERNS MATTER OF OUR HEART FOR SOMETIMES WE ARE BLINDSIDED BY WHAT ISN'T REALLY LOVE FROM THE JUMP OFF
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Re: Re. little poppies of pain
18th Jul 2019 5:19pm
you're so right dearest poet... thank you for your insight I deeply appreciate it...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. little poppies of pain
18th Jul 2019 5:43pm
YOUR VERY WELCOME DEAR SOUL I HAVE BEEN THROUGH A LOT OVER THE YEARS PRETENDING TO LOVE RELATIONSHIPS WHICH HAS MADE ME VERY WISE AND AWARE OF PEOPLE NOT WHAT THEY SAY BUT WHAT THEY DO IF THE ACTIONS DON'T MATCH THERE WORDS I'M DONE AND GONE I DON'T BELIEVE IN WASTING MY TIME NOR ENERGY
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Re. little poppies of pain
18th Jul 2019 5:44pm
The syllabic quality is quite mellifluous Brenda. This write has economy which counterpoints it's emotional and contemplative message. Awesome ink.
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Re: Re. little poppies of pain
18th Jul 2019 6:22pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel I'm happy this spoke to you and I got the flow right which isn't always easy...
I deeply appreciate you dear poet...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate you dear poet...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. little poppies of pain
18th Jul 2019 11:22pm
I can sense greater depths being brought to the surface - and put out onto the page with a great economy of words - great write.
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Re: Re. little poppies of pain
19th Jul 2019 1:01am
thank you dearest Josh yes emotions are surfacing some I wanted to avoid that's why I took time away I didn't want to face them...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
Re. little poppies of pain
Anonymous
21st Jul 2019 3:03am
Hey Crim......so many great lines thru out......another masterpiece.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. little poppies of pain
23rd Jul 2019 5:29pm
Seriously requesting to hear a reading of this piece....it has a super-conducting resonance.
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Re. little poppies of pain
23rd Jul 2019 7:00pm
I agree with the others on flow, which only gets better, it seems!
.. It's such a resonating piece too❤🌹
.. It's such a resonating piece too❤🌹
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