a brook

Yes. Nothing is more determined than water. Beautiful observation!

Thanks k

yes.. if only we could read
these lines
marking determination and perseverance

yes, it is not just the hard, sharp that carves the surface

loved the visual and the experience felt reading this gem Kumar.Thank You

Thanks c_f. The poem was always written in the shape of a stream coming toward the reader, but the imagery is a new addition. I'm glad it felt right to you :)

Water's power to shape things - you've captured the essence really neatly here. Like.

Thank you Josh. I think it reveals something about me that both my #determination entries are nature-oriented. I think I appreciate nature's determination far more than humankind's, even as I recognize that we are of course part of nature.

Thanks. I tend to veer toward limiting excess words, so I appreciate that!