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To His Pen, I Submit
He dips his quill in black ice and
scribes arctic winds underside
my spine
Crimson spills of Merlot wells
beneath my tongue as a lacerated lip
becomes a silencing pleasure
Cashmere fabric paralyzes my body
into a position of submission and I am
numbed by iced searing incisions,
unable to distinguish suffering from comfort
Satisfaction surfaces atop the buttery brown
dip that lies between my spine and his dream
as colors of sex, love, and pain conjugate a
lasting inscription of chiseled
quill to flesh intimacy
I placate his ego as his branding stick
becomes my emancipation
and freedom is found
woven in my mortal diary
by hand-stitched fibers
suspending this love
eternally
To his pen…I submit
scribes arctic winds underside
my spine
Crimson spills of Merlot wells
beneath my tongue as a lacerated lip
becomes a silencing pleasure
Cashmere fabric paralyzes my body
into a position of submission and I am
numbed by iced searing incisions,
unable to distinguish suffering from comfort
Satisfaction surfaces atop the buttery brown
dip that lies between my spine and his dream
as colors of sex, love, and pain conjugate a
lasting inscription of chiseled
quill to flesh intimacy
I placate his ego as his branding stick
becomes my emancipation
and freedom is found
woven in my mortal diary
by hand-stitched fibers
suspending this love
eternally
To his pen…I submit
Published 6th Jul 2019
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Another fabulous work of beauty. Your word usage is so damn appealing, I especially love the rich texture your euphanisms add to the imagery! I'm totally pen jelly, girl!!
7th Jul 2019 9:57pm
Your words are so encouraging! Thank you so much for your time and gracious comment😊
11th Jul 2019 00:08am
21st Jul 2019 4:13am
Teeya..this is so smooth graceful poetic and rich with meaning...
diggin the use of metaphors as well.
as always...you bring your unique flavor to the arts..
much respect...
diggin the use of metaphors as well.
as always...you bring your unique flavor to the arts..
much respect...
21st Jul 2019 5:07am
Naajir... How I've missed your words on my pages! I'm feeling all sentimental and thangz! I'm always truly honored by your presence.
